new world: apocalypse online
Author: kinv
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while everyone was procrastinating I was improving, getting stronger, faster, smarter, while everyone thought they were safe they were dying whilst I was cautious, and surviving, while everyone thought they had friends only to see a knife in their backs, I never trust, even when it appears I do.......while everyone was in the light..... I stick to the darkness
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edge lord writing, the only thing really setting it apart from really terrible writing is the proper use of grammar. the main character is boring and has next to no personality and only has edgelord traits such as "I trust no one" and "while you played I worked hard" and to top it all off he has no desire to inquire anything from anyone no matter what happens, he also lacks any creativeness he was told he could be any class, even those that don't exist and he chose necromancer, he could've created a class that could do necromancy and more but no, he just chose necromancer. the world is barely touched upon, the mc background is glossed over, and he lacks any charisma or even sign of being a human being. he was also listed as having heterochromia, one red one blue, but if you look at how heterochromia works its almost always one blue (lacks melanin) and one normal (has melanin) this guy is either affected by another health condition or something else and would be classified as Partial albinoism, also due to his red eye lacking any pigment it would be more sensitive to light,
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