Ok
As the synopsis doesn't say what to expect, one can go unbiased just knowing it's a story about broken hearts, and quickly dive into a realistic portray of a breakup. Just as I did.
The story revolves around two rich brothers, a rich woman, and a poor girl that crossed their ways and was dragged to their lives and problems. More than one people ended up hurt when it's time to think about future.
No one who really put her/himself fully in a relationship will emerge from it the same. The story so far keep me rooting for plot twist that will bring some healing to suffering hearts.
Translation: not sure about how the original is, bit the translation is on well written English.
Characters: believable imperfect women and men, suffering in their own way.
Background: believable and realistic.
5 years ago
2
Mandy_Calhoun
Well, I didn’t see that ending coming. The synopsis definitely doesn’t give this story much justice. Maybe it’s for the surprise factor 🤷🏻♀️ I found the story to be refreshing and quite different than other stories in its genre. I thought it was a great story with very realistic and relatable characters. It has a strong FL and was pretty straightforward and to the point. Great job author!
5 years ago
1
jogadorax
Give it a try.
After four chapters, I could say it's not for me. A lot of one sentence paragraphs that makes everything look like a dramatic statement. The story seems to drag eternally.
Anyway, someone else will think differently, it's just my opinion.
Ok As the synopsis doesn't say what to expect, one can go unbiased just knowing it's a story about broken hearts, and quickly dive into a realistic portray of a breakup. Just as I did. The story revolves around two rich brothers, a rich woman, and a poor girl that crossed their ways and was dragged to their lives and problems. More than one people ended up hurt when it's time to think about future. No one who really put her/himself fully in a relationship will emerge from it the same. The story so far keep me rooting for plot twist that will bring some healing to suffering hearts. Translation: not sure about how the original is, bit the translation is on well written English. Characters: believable imperfect women and men, suffering in their own way. Background: believable and realistic.
Well, I didn’t see that ending coming. The synopsis definitely doesn’t give this story much justice. Maybe it’s for the surprise factor 🤷🏻♀️ I found the story to be refreshing and quite different than other stories in its genre. I thought it was a great story with very realistic and relatable characters. It has a strong FL and was pretty straightforward and to the point. Great job author!
Give it a try. After four chapters, I could say it's not for me. A lot of one sentence paragraphs that makes everything look like a dramatic statement. The story seems to drag eternally. Anyway, someone else will think differently, it's just my opinion.