Harry Potter: A Fan Fiction
Author: Great_Lord_R
3.9
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I was born knowing the future of this world. How can I ever fail?
-Viktor Krum
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The author here... I don't really give a **** but yeah read my work. Every kind of **** is welcome as there is no limit whatsoever to my patience. JK. Feel free to read and criticise. It's a free country. Hahahahahahaha To those who says the MC is a duche I don't know what to say. I personally think he just wants to enjoy himself without being restricted by the human moral hypocrisy. Those who like him, well idk... Keep at it? I'll do my best to entertain myself in molding again his personality. If you are reading my work then thank you. Hate it. Love it. I don't give a **** just make comments on how I can improve it.
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I was quite fond of the story, then things just started to get weird. I want to read about the MC. Sending Harry on an adventure under the name freak and focusing on world events doesn't really do it for me.
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A very interesting and good fan fiction. it starts of very well, however after chapter 30-35 the story changes and instead of being one large sequence story, it more feels that each chapter is a side story with little to no connection to the previous chapter. the story is still great, however there are many chapters that are added which seem to have no connection to the main story and after the one chapter that they were mentioned in, they are not seen or mentioned again. Example: viviene lockhart. This is a very minor aspect however i feel that it takes alot from the story as it just seems to jump around too much.
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So... This story is alright, but it's not very cohesive. The grammar for the most point is pretty spot on, but at times it feels like I'm reading several different stories because one event will be happening and then the story will switch to something else for a few chapters and then come back to it. Honestly if it had a cohesive storyline to it, if probably rate it at least 4.5. As for character design, Victor's whole character is that he's the greatest genius ever, and that he is ruthless. He doesn't really have any traits that make him 3 dimensional