This is a masterpiece. Not one spelling mistake. The Plot is great. The story makes 100% sense. This is a must read!!!! If You dont not read this you will regret it
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jk this isnt good. If you are reading this author, edit all the chapters so they make sense.
4 years ago
6
KrisVFX
I don't mean to hate this story or anything but after reading the first chapter, I gave up!
The writing quality is terrible which can make anyone give up just from reading the first sentences of this story. The only thing that got me here was the title of this novel which sounded a little similar to the story I was planning on creating.
Anyway, the character is mentally disabled, or that's what I understood from the way he was talking. His words didn't make any sense at all.
I had to read it more than 10 times to understand what the author meant to say.
No matter how good your story is, if the writing quality doesn't get improved, no one is going to read this...
When I write chapters on my novels, I always think that my structure and writing skills are bad, but oh boy was I wrong.
I found someone even worse than me XD.
In the end, if you don't reupdate the chapters, no one will read this story.
Maybe I will try and read this story again in the future who knows!
I hope you will get better in the future and I might remove this review and give 5*.
Good Luck!
4 years ago
3
Kazyacanon
I love this novel and I hope the Author can start updating again 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
5 years ago
3
SuicidalSkeletin
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
3
WorldofFireworks
4 years ago
1
adaren06
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
3 years ago
0
rebecca_ringdomsto
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This is a masterpiece. Not one spelling mistake. The Plot is great. The story makes 100% sense. This is a must read!!!! If You dont not read this you will regret it . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . jk this isnt good. If you are reading this author, edit all the chapters so they make sense.
I don't mean to hate this story or anything but after reading the first chapter, I gave up! The writing quality is terrible which can make anyone give up just from reading the first sentences of this story. The only thing that got me here was the title of this novel which sounded a little similar to the story I was planning on creating. Anyway, the character is mentally disabled, or that's what I understood from the way he was talking. His words didn't make any sense at all. I had to read it more than 10 times to understand what the author meant to say. No matter how good your story is, if the writing quality doesn't get improved, no one is going to read this... When I write chapters on my novels, I always think that my structure and writing skills are bad, but oh boy was I wrong. I found someone even worse than me XD. In the end, if you don't reupdate the chapters, no one will read this story. Maybe I will try and read this story again in the future who knows! I hope you will get better in the future and I might remove this review and give 5*. Good Luck!
I love this novel and I hope the Author can start updating again 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Reveal Spoiler
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.