Holding a symbol of an entire species and inspiring hope in the hearts of an entire planet is harder than most can ever imagine but not for her.
The Last Daughter of Krypton does not have to imagine such a burden, not when she has to guide an entire race of beings so similar yet different from her own.
As you can see I transferred the fic to here but since I used this one before as a previous version (A VERY different one) of the fic some reviews are on it, Do help me fix this.
great story interesting characters , no plot holes that I noticed so far and overall a really interesting read , waiting for more chapters though 😀
Good Start I hope she ends up learning magic from the ancient one and get stronger ....................................................................
Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far Keep it up your idea looks great so far and its a nice book so far
I read all the versions and every one is the best. keep that good work ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, with am unique take on past memories. The fact that you try to explain what made superman, well superman is one of the things that got me hooked, I mean who doesn't love superman, the only thing that irritated me is how exactly he broke the laws of physics, and I can now sleep with peace because of you.
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Love this story I cannot wait to read more and see where you take this in the future very well thought out and great character development!!!!!!!
It is a good try at a dc / marvel story. It Uses a original character Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
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The summary is great but where is the story? 🥺🥺I do not find anything🥺................................. ................................ ................................................................................................................................
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