Titan Smithing in the Magical Apocalypse
The world comes to an abrupt end on one Wednesday afternoon as a deep voice suddenly booms across the sky.
"Pitiful lifeforms, I am your creator. I have grown bored of your world so I have decided to change it. From now on you will have to fight in order to survive. Those of you that please me will gain abilities beyond your imagination and those that choose not to will suffer at the hands of higher lifeforms." A red light suddenly envelopes the world for a fraction of a second and then the world changed." I have changed this world and every living thing that calls it home. You will get stronger or you will die, appease me peasants and you just might survive."
The entire population of the planet suddenly got a searing pain in their heads at the same time.
*DING* *DING*
'Congratulations on becoming a Player'
The world grew silent as they read the words in front of them, no one knew the language in front of their eyes and yet everyone knew it. It was ingraved into their brains as if it had been their forever, their own languages dissappearing as if they were never there to begin with.
The planet descended into chaos it was as if the entire world had suddenly decided that nowhere was safe and everyone was their enemy. Then every single living thing on the planet fell into a trance, their eyes turned a glossy white and the whole world stopped.
'Welcome to the player creation screen please follow the systems instructions and create your player.'
Interesting idea. But... 1-Normal dude isn’t worried by the announcement of god 2-Take the character creation as if it were a regular game and not a life-or-death situation 3-Bad system. Regular lv1 skills cost 1-2 skill points, then you have lvMax highest grade skill costing 5 skill points. 4-Bad skill. Ultimate skill give invisibility and invulnerability. Invulnerability has nothing to do with stealth, and should be the highest grade of a defense skill instead. Ultimate stealth should be about being undetectable to all 5 senses, and possibly some magical/spiritual means. 5-Random bonus from god to the ordinary guy, most likely because the author felt like giving him more of a head-start because ultimate stealth wasn’t enough. 6-Bad skill selection. The guy clearly wasn’t thinking about survival, but just gaming. You’d think he would have though of detection and crafting skills, because, you know, he doesn’t have any notable skills aside from gaming. 7-The apocalypse started and the protagonist is quick to trust the 1st person he meets, going as far as carelessly showing his back to her. 8-The characters aren’t bothered by killing, seeing people be killed. It’s already absolutely normal. That’s a few minutes after the start of the apocalypse. 9-Generous undeserved loot (2 mithril items), because the author wanted to give him another boost. It’s one thing to give him Easy Level bonus if he is the only one with a system, it’s another to boost him when everyone should have started equal. I saw that it’s your 3rd attempt at that kind (outbreak/apocalyptic) of novel. Your plot and character design still need some work.
JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
The characters feel forced and he is able to kill someone so easily and feels nothing afterwards like its nothing... He is just a gamer/streamer that's not normal also he trusts someone just after meeting them it all feels so forced and not right
Great book
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ** this book is so lol🤣😂📖🙏🤣😂📖🙏🤣
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It is amazing I really love this book it is way better than all of your others keep up the good work and please write the next chapter soon👌😎💯🇰🇷🙏
Great book keep up the work ♥️ the story is great and the scenes is all breath taking hope too see it rise to the top , keep up the updates for us
Great book keep it up.
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