What the f*ck have I just read...
This story is so random and so immature, yet somehow, it's f*cking hilarious.
Just read it and you'll understand.
5 years ago
3
SHX
So far I really enjoyed your first chapter. I am exited to see more of it in the future. You have a nice writing style that is not to difficult to understand, also props to your editor.
I hope that you will go in detail on the characters that also might be a good idea to develop the characters.
5 years ago
3
Biaches
Dit is geweldig. Tijdens quarantaine was ik altijd bezig met... Laat maar. Nu kan ik eindelijk iets anders doen. Ook hoop ik dat dit nog verder gaat. Het is zon zieke cliffhanger.
What the f*ck have I just read... This story is so random and so immature, yet somehow, it's f*cking hilarious. Just read it and you'll understand.
So far I really enjoyed your first chapter. I am exited to see more of it in the future. You have a nice writing style that is not to difficult to understand, also props to your editor. I hope that you will go in detail on the characters that also might be a good idea to develop the characters.
Dit is geweldig. Tijdens quarantaine was ik altijd bezig met... Laat maar. Nu kan ik eindelijk iets anders doen. Ook hoop ik dat dit nog verder gaat. Het is zon zieke cliffhanger.