Mechanical Genius: Legendary Engineer
Author: NoOne_Official
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What would you do if you discovered that after a weird dream you can now see through buildings, objects, and many things?
The once blurry vision you've always had is now gone!
The floor became a grid pattern with scientific data scrolling through your eyes like a computer!
Even staring at an object causes it to automatically scan things and give you the data you need!
Let's join Atlas as he journey in the world of Engineering
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P.S. I'm a newbie author so please have patience, if you don't like to see mistakes please don't read the story cuz' it has tons of it. However, if you want a book that not only the MC is developing but the author as well, you are free to read my book! I hope you enjoy it!
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I think the overall premise is good, but there are just so many POV's and it switches so frequently that it is confusing me. I think POV switching should be highly limited for ease of reading.
The conversation seems a bit forced, its not even funny. I only give it reviews because the concept is unique, if not for that, I woul just straight leave here. So I hope it would improve. Might come back later if it improves
To many POV
So the novel is really good and I would definitely recommend it as the idea is very fresh and unique. However, the conversations have alot of room to improve, so I hope the author improves that later. Will definitely shelve this and give it a try :)
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this is a dreat novel with a new and refreshing idea that till now i think is implemented beautifully. so i hope to see this through and for it to be a long term project.so keep at it author.
Would rate it five, but since this is just a rough draft--I'll give it a four. Point-of-views is confusing but, yeah... It can be fix over time... Haven't read all of the chapter. But I'll work on it.