A casual fan of bleach gets reincarnated into soul society. Unlike most others, he has very little knowledge about what goes on in Bleach besides the major stuff. See how he goes through life and tries to survive in this chaotic world
Temporary title. Since I keep writing stories and fanfictions, and this site limits the number of ones I can write, I'm going to make this a compilation novel. Will divide different stories or novel ideas into different novels.
deleted novel will be added btw
4 years ago
33
Menhera_chan
Seems incredibly interesting until now (ch. 20). I really hope you do not include some kind of a harem into this. I would like some light romance though.
4 years ago
53
Sam_Richardson
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4 years ago
31
PeterGriffith
If you're expecting someone who is avoiding stuff like fighting and unnecessary confrontation from other's. Then you're looking for the wrong one.
This Fic is about someone who wants to be the strongest, not someone who wants to just survive and live a care Free life without unnecessary fights.
The writing is average at best seen better stuff but I digress. As for story development, it's alright. Though it would need more clearer directions and solidifying of character's, because he just gives most of the time a quick summary instead of the characters being more fleshed out (You still got ok on my list for trying. Not trying to sound like an As*hole or anything)
Lastly. This review is of my own opinions for this Fic, not what others glorified it to be. (I apologize for anyone who ever is offended by my words)
Well, good day and keep improving
4 years ago
29
David_Drake
A very promising start. I'm a bit iffy on his zanpakuto spirit though.
The fic starts around 300 AD after the Quincy war. His sword's spirit is a Chaos God from 40k and he acts meek and avoids attention. Not a bad combo when he wants to be lazy and out of danger. So I recommend others to give this a read.
4 years ago
17
shiro_43
it interesting i just don't like the handicap that he has to go through it just kind of dumb if I'm honest .........................................................
4 years ago
9
ApexCreator
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4 years ago
6
Nyaaaaa
This is surprisingly really good.
4 years ago
5
Marcosvinicius
Até agora está incrível.
A obra explora uma grande parte do universo de Bleach que sempre teve muito potencial estou muito animado com o futuro da trama e dos personagens.
4 years ago
4
RaizelF
A good read different from. Other Bleach fanfics [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
4 years ago
4
neobenmike
Early chaps are cringe but get better after around chap 34, it gets somewhat better. The main nuances here are all the plot holes that make this ff look like a swiss cheese
4 years ago
3
AllSeeingMystery
Good fanfiction, you’ve given a twist to the plot I haven’t seen done before. Its intresting and keeps me wanting to read more. Keep up the good work! 👍🏼
This is my favourite bleach fanfic. Ren's personality is just great, the pacing of the story is also good but the best part of the fanfic is its story development throughout the chapters. I personally think this is your best work, keep it up.
Temporary title. Since I keep writing stories and fanfictions, and this site limits the number of ones I can write, I'm going to make this a compilation novel. Will divide different stories or novel ideas into different novels. deleted novel will be added btw
Seems incredibly interesting until now (ch. 20). I really hope you do not include some kind of a harem into this. I would like some light romance though.
Reveal Spoiler
If you're expecting someone who is avoiding stuff like fighting and unnecessary confrontation from other's. Then you're looking for the wrong one. This Fic is about someone who wants to be the strongest, not someone who wants to just survive and live a care Free life without unnecessary fights. The writing is average at best seen better stuff but I digress. As for story development, it's alright. Though it would need more clearer directions and solidifying of character's, because he just gives most of the time a quick summary instead of the characters being more fleshed out (You still got ok on my list for trying. Not trying to sound like an As*hole or anything) Lastly. This review is of my own opinions for this Fic, not what others glorified it to be. (I apologize for anyone who ever is offended by my words) Well, good day and keep improving
A very promising start. I'm a bit iffy on his zanpakuto spirit though. The fic starts around 300 AD after the Quincy war. His sword's spirit is a Chaos God from 40k and he acts meek and avoids attention. Not a bad combo when he wants to be lazy and out of danger. So I recommend others to give this a read.
it interesting i just don't like the handicap that he has to go through it just kind of dumb if I'm honest .........................................................
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This is surprisingly really good.
Até agora está incrível. A obra explora uma grande parte do universo de Bleach que sempre teve muito potencial estou muito animado com o futuro da trama e dos personagens.
A good read different from. Other Bleach fanfics [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Early chaps are cringe but get better after around chap 34, it gets somewhat better. The main nuances here are all the plot holes that make this ff look like a swiss cheese
Good fanfiction, you’ve given a twist to the plot I haven’t seen done before. Its intresting and keeps me wanting to read more. Keep up the good work! 👍🏼
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This is my favourite bleach fanfic. Ren's personality is just great, the pacing of the story is also good but the best part of the fanfic is its story development throughout the chapters. I personally think this is your best work, keep it up.