Devil of the Body Flicker

Another great DXD FF...probably one of the handful thats decent, English, grammar and structure is dope MC is shisui as an SI in DXD in OG pillar. And theres no rush, author spends time showing development, like 15 chps and we are still in childhood, yah..author wants to show development, nice..do continue. better than other **** where MC is fking in 3 paragraphs. I will say that MC seems a tiny bit OC, but I suppose this is to be expected cause MC did die and reincarnate and as a result is kinda a new entity, so its fine. The OC characters past is something that would interesting to know. As for MC power, I dont really know, its OP in paper,,,but it has no pazzaz [ meaning its related to teleportation, its OP yes but no pazzaz like giant energy mechs and puppets and ****- then again author might change],,,but from the way I see it I think u need brains to so its really interesting, plus its perfect for shisui. Suggestion: OP MC, atleast well beyond everyone in his generation, I mean dude is a reincarnate. Make him smart, ruthless, and calculative and secretive [hide power---really do this cause he ninja, now yes, him being a devil and as result his sin might prevent but fk it,,,he a ninja first,,,so yah]...also plan, he was a commander. Any relationships build and take it slow. Also travel world, like go to china, Ireland , Africa [some country],,, Powers: Illusions related , Fire related , Time related, Erasure related **: And yes, i know, I didnt give 5 star despite this deserving it more than anything, and well its cause I despise when MC goes after moms or wives,,so yah,,,but bk was too good to pass..so yah. I;d give 4.9 but I dont know how

Let's make this a five star...🤣🤣🤣🤣 It's good I like it. Though wish the author would spend less time with his girlfriend and more time writing new chapters.😐😐😐 🤣🤣🤣🤣

endless chaos is a cuck and I **** his mom every day as he spams 1 stars other fanfics like a retard. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I spam 5 stars. If you ignore me, i will spam 1 star. Just like your last chapter notice. I dare you to ignore me, and drop this fanfic. I will show yo... nah second though, my bed is to comfy to let me move.

God:Hmmm I wonder how shisui is doing...I’ve forgotten to check on him in the recent years *Sees what he is doing Layla:’Shisuiiii’~ you aren’t escaping now... Seekvaira:’You’ve finally fallen into my time manipulation magic, there’s no avoiding us now... Shisui:HELP ME I KNOW YOUR THERE!!! God: ...winners in life should all die Shisui:NNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! -9months later, a healthy set of triplets and twins has been born.

🌹Roses are red, Violets are blue and those who rates 1 star will get cucked without any clue...............,.............................. .

I am doing this because author paid me 1000 dollars for five star review (jk) Lets start...... Shisui is one of the most unexplored characters in naruto and seeing him in a fic in dxd is surprising in a good way. I was (still am ) sick of reading fics where Naruto goes to other worlds and this is a fresh breath compared to those. Writing quality : Decent and things flow well. (nothing much to say but can get better in some areas) Stability: Good I guess...I read this in one sitting. Now I will just write everything together... So Shisui in dxd seems like a good idea but only if it is executed well which author has done. Now Shisui here is not a copy paste of himself from naruto but is one who experienced death and death changes people. So shisui here is a bit ooc but in a good way as he follows his ancestors path (madara ) rather than stupid will of fire. He is more cunning and all in all shisui but improved. World is in dxd which has huge potential and ngl when I saw the au tag I was a bit scared as au mostly miss and ruin everythhing but in this not too many changes are introduced and if they are they don't ruin the plot. Next up, mc's powers.....he gets gifts from god which irked me a bit but I got over it as the story is good. Overall a decent dxd fic worth reading.

Great story so far , and its shisui mf uchiha what more do you want 👍🏽 Ps. There is no ps just trying to get the hundred and forty characters

This is an amazing novel that i suggest you read... Ps: If you give me a dollar i will hug you😁 Pss: Always hated when you have to write a certain amount.

Hmmm I wanted to give you a 1 star but I kinda like your novel so I gave you 5 anyway good luck with writing and kill issei se ya! ✋.

Well story is good and this is one of the stories that i enjoy to read...... And author haters won't stop giving you 1 star and sh***y comments but well from all the other comments anyone can sum up a simple thing and that is this fanfic is enjoyable. So, you shouldn't give a damn about those who don't know how to even write stories but only mess with other s (not talking about genuine comments from readers who literally saying what they have in mind. What i mean is what's the meaning of E E E E E E E E E E E E E E E after giving one star well if its otherworld language then sorry but i am from earth and i never travelled out in universe to learn this language). 😄👍👍👍😁

I like Shusui, he was one of the best characters in Naruto. Seeing him being in a protagonist in his own book is good. This book seems promising and i would like to read more of it. I'd like to author to increase the release without making worse the story, I know everybody like to read more of the stories that they like, but I really like to have more.

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Thank you for this enjoyable story. I am looking forward to future chapters. I am excited to read your approach to key points in the dxd canon as well as Shisui's further growth.