Origins

I was waiting patiently for this one. The first part was a favorite of mine and the second is looking to do the same. I have no doubt that the author will make us love their work.

So I loved the first one and I like this one... I just don’t know why you said it will focus less on the Harem in this on considering in the first it didn’t focus on it that much either it was mainly him worrying about his space dream and creating inventions........ so yeah

And we r back with shockingly the same high quality. Personally I really have to thank you. These stories you write make my day each time I read a new chapter.

This author's Harry Potter stories are without a doubt the best in all of fanfiction.

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Another masterpiece😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

This is an amazing story that wont dissapoint, it is a sequel to Back to the Beginning another equally amazing story. Highly recommended- 5 Stars

the story is very good, chapters are really long.

The author fused sg-1 and hp fanfic in a very entertaining direction. Hopefully the author will be able to write many more series in the future if they want to of course. Thank you.

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Absolutely amazing. I love how author-san shaped and developed the world and story. The interactions between the main characters and side characters are realistic and not just used to advance the plot. I look forward to more of author-san's future work!

It is difficult to find something to dislike about both, the previous story by the author, and this one without sounding like some petty nitpicker. The writing quality is superb even if it sometimes seemed a bit rushed, which can be excused, since the author seemed to have just too many ideas for the content to go into detail for everything. The only thing that I really don't like is how sensei finishes his stories. For both stories (in my opinion and in lack of a better metaphor) it felt as if one is making love to a beauty for hours and then not finishing it for a lack of energy or motivation. While the whole process was awesome and enjoyable the whole time, there was just something lacking to call it a proper ending to me. Personally, for example I would have really liked to have the situation with macusa and the other magical governments solved, though I guess with how much content the author throws at the reader that part of the story could potentially fill a whole new book. All things considered I've enjoyed the story immensely and the few negative points I've mentioned could also be deliberate cliffhangers by the author in preparation for his following works, since a few of the open points of the prequel have also been handled in this story.

It was great reading about this. It was fun. At first I thought so little chapters, what could be in there then when I started reading, I figured out that one chapter baby this author is more than 50 chapters of some others

it's a good novel. I like your idea and writing. it will best if you make a short but many chapter than one large chapter. I hope your new novel soon.