Dual Cultivation Life Of Immortal Yi

Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!). The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist. Still, I don't recommend this. The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built. Don't read this, save your eyes!

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First and foremost! Don't stop at the first chapter or the third, because this is quite good(If you're not quite disturbed by a single thing) The pacing is normal for the start. Good. Humorous MC. Great.(for me at least) Chapter? We have chapters everyday! Grammar. Quite good if you don't sought something only professional writer had. So overall this is great! And i'm expecting for more

Now.. Where should I start from? Story progress fast. MC is an immortal but acts like a teenager in first chapter. Some of you might drop it half way but don't! Casue there are kinky chapters waiting for you! 🍾🍾🍾 World building is not shown so far but according to the narration it's sounds big I guess? Moving fast forward.. The novel needs some polishing. Like author using "Yang" as "Ying" It's YANG! All in all, I have much hope for this novel. Let's hope author doesn't disappoint us. P. S. It's quite hard to write a review when chapters are less. Give us a mass release! That's all.

buena novela quiero mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas...

Great novel with unique cultivation system. The novel just has 8 chapters released but all of them are good. Looking for the future chapters and i expect more from this. I can't say more about the characters and story development from 8 chapters but i will definitely review again later in future.

The Book is consistent enough in grammar,(If you wouldn't take note about English depth) The pacing is great, The MC is quite humorous. The only thing I don't like is I find this book early where no little chapters just yet for now. So! BLUE BALLS!!

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After reading for some page I came to this point that it gives me - a light boner nothing more than that. It's just a mindless vulgar ride If you are not into some brainless ****ery then it's not for you but for me it was fine at least. *I came here just for completing my review task so don't take me seriously*