Long Gone

Ok.... Whoa. Firstly, I'm addicted to this type of genre, and second, I'm tending to like the main character! Something tells me it won't be easy for her in the rest of the book but hey! I only read the first chapter and count me in on the rest!

I like how this story began. It is well-developed. It is very interesting, I fell in love with the novel. The only thing I can point is the inconsistent tense but overall the story is very good. Good Job author

Love the suspense and thrill vibe of this story... the plot is intriguing- unfolding the truth behind the mysterious death of a friend. It will be an exciting journey for both ML and FL. Keep it up author. Update more because reader would be eager to read what happened next.

ok first of all-- WOW, this book is definitely a page turner. I really love the way this book gave off a mysterious vibe right off the bat! I also love the way you described their friendship; you were not really descriptive but keeping it simple gave more feeling and weight as to how much close they are. I really liked it. Keep up the good work!

I love this novel, It is really amazing,. Can't stop from scrolling down to see what's next, Did a great job, keep it up 😊

I am hooked! This novel really takes you to a level higher than your ordinary mystery novel. Although there are a few grammar errors, i couldn't stop myself from scrolling down to know what's next. Great job, author-san!

I honestly really like the characters in this story😭😭. I can't wait for more chapters!Enjoyable read. Cute story with natural dialogue and relatable characters. I would definitely recommend this one.

I liked reading the book. There are only four chapters yet so I can't say much but the author has done a great job in setting the storyline. The next chapters would be full of suspense. Can't wait. All the best!

I will be honest and I am here to make improvements for your novel. Some dialogues has no name on who said it....and her action or feelings while saying it. It was hard at first when you write about the tenses. It was inconsistent and you need to choose one. Present tenses were more alluring to hear and past tenses were more used by matured writers. It was on you what to choose. And for more further improvements, please read more novels of expert writers of the same genre and learn from them. How to write dialogues, synopsis and everything. Please do the same to my book Waking Up In Undead World. See you later!

I like the unpredictability of this novel. An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.

A fascinating detective novel. The character is deep, interesting. The plot is dynamic. It is interesting to read. The novel is generally good, apart from a few moments where it appears - cliché plots. But in general it is very exciting. Good luck to the author!

This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!

Very intriguing horror story that the author is trying to create here I can see, really got that sense of atmosphere, with minimum grammar mistakes I can find. Added to my collection, keep it up Author!

This book is lit!! I like how it began............... well developed characters.......good story lines......Author has done a great job....Keep going..🖤🖤