A Three-Ring Circus
A murder mystery changes the lives of the Carter brothers. In pursuit of the truth the Carter brothers change their opinions on life. They learn to love, to trust and also to hate someone.
Owen Carter, the eldest among the brothers hates superficial girls who lust after him. Mrs. Parker is his new secretary whom he had selected after a lot of consideration because he believes that she is meticulous and mature.
But who knows that the actual scenario will be veryyyy much different.
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"Mrs. Parker.... Please tell the planning department to submit another proposal. Tell them... Stress my words!!! Tell them not to burn a hole in my pocket by submitting these kind of proposals another time".
Mrs. Parker stood there for a long time before asking carefully, "Sir, You did not tell which pocket? the left one or the Right one? the front ones or the back ones?"
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Owen questions his thoughts on his life.
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Blake Carter enjoys life to the extreme. He believes that he is born for the sake of girls.
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Blake believing in his charms goes to the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. In the bar he approaches the girl by donning his most charming smile.
"Hey babe.. Do you mind if I take a seat?" Without waiting for her answer he approaches a chair opposite to her. She stretches her legs and places them on it. When he try to sit on the chair beside her, she pours the drink in her hand on it. When he try to take the last chair shamelessly she gets up leisurely.
"All yours...." Arya left after playing with him.
Blake's confidence is shaken for the first time in his life.
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Max Carter is a shut in. He hates when people invades his privacy the most.
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Max is changing in his room. He takes off his Tshirt and is about to take off his pants when he hears a sharp shriek.
He is shocked to see a girl in his wardrobe. And then he became furious.
"What are you doing????" he roared at his new neighbour.
"I came to see whether you are a pervert." Ms. Arnold says righteously.
"........"
Max is speechless.
'You are the one who ran into my apartment. You are the one who hid in my wardrobe. And lastly you are the one who was watching while I was changing. Why am I the pervert here?'
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The three brother's choices of life are questioned by the three women and their lives become a three ring circus.
Will they accept Love when it comes knocking on the door? Or they push aside love and escape the torment.
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Eliza goes missing one day in mysterious circumstances. Later the news that Eliza is dead brings devastation upon her family. Her family blames Eliza's friend, Buttercup.
Can Eliza's murder mystery be unraveled? Who is the murderer? Who is Buttercup? What is her relation with the three women? Can she extract revenge from Eliza's murderer? Read my novel to know the secrets.
This novel is a compilation of mystery, Fun, Love and revenge. Give this novel a chance guys..
Also guys I stress my words... the first 100 or so chapters will be purely fun. only later the mystery begins... the chapters maybe silly but who does not want to laugh a bit. right? please don't judge the book so early.. And give it a try...
Your story is really good...It is not like those which we read always it is different...It's lighthearted cute story...👍👍 You enjoy those some funny moments inbetween....Very nicely expressed...I love the way you wrote it...Simple story but good one👍👍👍👏👏
I managed to read all the 18 chapters. The gap between the first chapter and the second chapter comes after many years have lapsed. This left me a bit confused. The writing quality is good, stability of updates is ok. The story is developing well. The character design and the world background are shaping well. The book is amusing in places. There is a fun element too and an underlying mystery that needs to be solved. I will be watching out for its progress and reading it later on. All the best, Author!
your story is quite different than the ones I've read. I find it very adorable and hilarious. lol. I like how, even though it is meant to be mystery, you added loads of humor and comedy in it. The Carter brothers are indeed relatable and fascinating to understand. Not only that, but to find the connection between them and the murdered girl is what draws the reader the most. So I love it! Hoping for more chapters! :D
The story is light and enjoyable to read.... It kept me on my toes and wanting for more.. You have a good grip of your descriptions and vocabulary. I liked the mysterious feeling surrounding the story. Overall a very well written. I am waiting for more...
I am so proud of you my fan. You doing perfectly well. The grammar is good as far as I am concerned. Your character development is good too.
Authorrrrrr..... Superbbbbbb.... Till now I am so very happy I read this one... The comedy is ultimate. I am loving it. I will give another review again later when the story develops more... But upto now superb fun.... I totally cracked up... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
The story is light-hearted after the beginning. To be honest, I would make it eerier, the scene where he observed her, but that's my style. You have a good grip of your descriptions, your vocabulary is good and also put to good use. There is not much to say about the world building yet, so I can't give it full marks. I liked the characters, each in their own way, yes, even the killer/kidnapper. Each characters has their own charm. ** After I read the chapters about Mrs. Parker and her huge, juicy, perky butt, I have not stopped thinking about it. Please do write more on that topic.🧐 Keep it up, Author!
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It's a very light-hearted story and a lot of mystery is tied into it too. However, even though it's supposed to be cloaked with mystery,the author manages to add a lot of comedy to it and I really like that. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but besides that, it's a really interesting story*adds to library*. You nice,keep going!
This book is quite interesting. Just the first chapter and I was already eager to find out more. Nice story author. Now let's come to the writing and the character design. Though there are some minor errors, they do not affect the flow of the story. It is almost flawless and the characters have been well designed. The story is smooth and quite easy to read. All in all, this is a great work, All the best author.
I like Mystery novel. But unfortunately, it didn't get me hook up because it felt like I was reading a dialogue-- perhaps, it's my problem.
Your novel is interesting to say the least. You use very interesting way to narrate the story and it suits the overall story. The way you introduce characters, is excellent. I'm yet to read much of your novel but I do think it would be great.
Defenetly an interesting story, both plot, and character-wise. From the few chapters that I have read I can say its a story worth giving a read to, and the writing itself is fantastic. best regards, author.
A fun, enjoyable read, had hoped for a bit more of an edge, but for what it is, its well written and the characters are clearly established. Looking forward to further developments.
The story is well written and well paced with interesting characters interacting in interesting character dynamics. There's a lot of mystery and suspense at the beginning, so if you're a fan of those, check this work out.