MARVEL: GOING HERO(DISCONTINUED)

why don't you make a suit for yourself and serum with the help of gray matter and upgrade? I read it if the human body is strong then his alien will be strong. it will help him even I'm Omnitrix on cool down. at least make the suit for him. and take some money from corrupt people with help of gray matter also make an ai strong than any version and upgrade it help of upgrade

The ratings would be better if the grammar is fixed. It has allot of potential but the readability is very annoying. The premise of this story is already used in other fanfic, but the others are more developed and this is fairly new.

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Tho the only thing I really don't like is it took 2 years for the mc to interact with the other characters I mean I know he's a loner but c'mon would it kill you to atleast talk with them overall I really like the story so farm. Ps.ignore my ranting im not really good with these stuff

It’s was good I just hope for more chapters

Its a good one kep it up, I Like How this is not a bizarre harem fanfic and the protagonist is cool bit of I I'm honest you should use the ultimate forms or try to make it real with grey matter.

it's a decent enough story but there's a few too many grammatical errors. the 140 character limit is stupid. ................................

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Its interesting,wish the grammar was better though.

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