The War God is an Idiot
Author: EXceL
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A player named Blank joins a VRMMO game known as Dreamer. But, what at first was just fun and games is now his new way to live his life.
Through the game, Blank learns the harshness of this world and establish himself as a successful man.
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So this was definitely an interesting story which can attract those who play these types of games such as myself and I enjoy how the author was able to capture the feeling like the odd one out around many other experienced players. Sadly, while the current story is very interesting, it is riddled with grammatical errors, bland descriptions, and a severe lack of emotions. There is much, and I mean much to be desired from the novel as it has a great plot but it isn't executed very well. Taking some time to re-read your chapters and rewrite them will definitely increase the popularity of your story. Writing isn't that easy, but I know you can improve!
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