the son of zeus

Absolutely unrealistic and horribly written wall of text that is rather difficult to read. MC is abused by his new mother quite horribly, and he learns archery at the age of 4 and competes in archery for 2 years and in that time he somehow funnels money from his mother to his own checking account... a 6 year old.. It's honestly just a piece of shit.

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It is just so unrealistic that I was unable to continue reading it. Ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

Writing Quality: 2 Hard to read. The grammar and flow is all over the place. Stability of Updates: 4 This novel has many chapters as of this review post date. Story Development: 2 The story does not flow well. Rebirth, abused by parents since 4 years old, an archery master in kindergarten, adults not reacting logically Character Design: 3 Look at Story Development World Background: 5 There are too few Percy Jackson fan fiction novels.

Personally I love the story even if at times it is unrealistic because thats fiction baby also there are plenty of ways to funnel money away from someone especially if you have their credit card also children can learn archery at the age of 4 especially if they are a demigod. I love it because its sometimes unrealistic because it just adds flavor.

very good novel pity author dropped it fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

it has no fluidity. if it had a good plot with good writing it would actually be a good book.i find it difficult to comment something good about this book so I'm just going to say it's a good character name.

horrible writing, he could have just told some cop or something about his mother (but instead, the masochistic author just gets the mc beaten up without doing anything... like, nothing. he just accepts the spanking and scars ) would make sense if he transmigrated to the child (but the author's masochist just decides to catch him

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