well nothing to read here, don't expect some awesome plot since author himself seems like anime watcher only so expect some contradiction but the plot basically stay similar with cannon with some bits different.
the story mostly revolve about the halfass attempt of mc to stay away from the plot which obviously won't happen mostly.
those who never read the manga or watch the anime may have a hard time following what's happen since there's no description of the character & the motivation between each character beside tsuna being typical ditzy , Takeshi the high jump kid & the lazy mc.
to put in nutshell this is just your typical 2 Dimensional self insert character.
if you don't care about the quality you might enjoy this story.
4 years ago
12
Rayama
Well... The mc has no brain... What else can I say but braindead. Sure its meant to be funny that she gets dragged into the mafia family business etc, buttttt shes so serious about avoiding them and wanting nothing to do with them but still manages to do exact opposite of what she wanted to do. Welp gl anyway author
4 years ago
5
Wriothesley_Main
This is really good👍👍 different from most fanfics where the MC joins the plot, this one has a MC where she highly avoids it. It's been a while since we saw a lazy character and it's one of my fav so that's a plus. The interactions between character is really funny especially with reborn🙃🙃 I look forward to more of this, SO DON'T YOU DARE DROP IT!!
Good Job Author-sama😆😆😆
4 years ago
5
Sirione
it was acceptable even before mukuro appeared ... it seems that the author completely ignored vindice and did not give any explanation about it ... and this forced interest that appeared out of nowhere in the mc for mukuro.
4 years ago
2
Naaaaaaa
Not the best nor the worst. The quality of writing is ok and has little to no gramatical and spelling errors.
Updates are pretty consistant but at this time of writing if it follows the trend of most new stories itll stop updating in about next month to the next 4 months (i hope this dosent happen cuz i dont see a lot of female lead characters or lazy protaganist that work decently)
Overall its a fun read so far by wut i assume to be a relitivly new author so keep up the good work and enjoy being in this small community author :)
4 years ago
2
Adriana7885
It’s a nice and quick fast paced read with a bit of romance. I liked it overall.
5 months ago
0
Wolf_lore11
is good
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a year ago
0
Cely_Varela
———————————————————————————————————————— I am speechless. This is one of th greatest books I have read on Webnovel that’s actually completed!
2 years ago
0
Red_Forshaw
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2 years ago
0
JF48_Faith
absolute master piece!! i like the mc and it just make me feel giddy!!! and excited!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
3 years ago
0
HiddenBoss
This novel was beautiful you made me clap at a book who claps at a book I did because that was in the best entertaining s*** I've ever seen I loved it we need more of your kind author-sama you're so f****** awesome I want to read more of what you write best novel ever
3 years ago
0
Isaac_Cramp
Loved the characters and the Way The story was written. the ending was a great close and would love too see a part 2. Would recommend any day of the week.
3 years ago
0
scarlett_hellsing
now this is the first review ever doing.
I would say it's a good read though like I said in one of my comments it feels rushed.
the chapters were short however I'm used to that from other novels/books.
it was detailed enough that my imagination could fill in the blanks but someone with a lesser imagination might have a hard time.
4 years ago
0
Mercifull777
I honestly don’t know why this novel doesn’t get more love, i mean its one of my favorite.
When i first started to read this i actually dropped it for a while, but picked it back up cause i was bored and then proceeded to read the entire thing in a few hours.
The start of the book is in my opinion not very good, but it just gets better and better as time goes on. I highly recommend this for anyone looking for something different because it is very unique, i have seen many novels crash and burn because they fail to set up a different type of story, but i can confidently say that this one peformed outstandingly well.
The only thing i didn’t really like was the relationships in the beginning happened way to fast for my taste, but if you continue to read the author gives a good reason to why this happened so don’t drop instantly like i did, continue to read and you may find a diamond in the rough.
well nothing to read here, don't expect some awesome plot since author himself seems like anime watcher only so expect some contradiction but the plot basically stay similar with cannon with some bits different. the story mostly revolve about the halfass attempt of mc to stay away from the plot which obviously won't happen mostly. those who never read the manga or watch the anime may have a hard time following what's happen since there's no description of the character & the motivation between each character beside tsuna being typical ditzy , Takeshi the high jump kid & the lazy mc. to put in nutshell this is just your typical 2 Dimensional self insert character. if you don't care about the quality you might enjoy this story.
Well... The mc has no brain... What else can I say but braindead. Sure its meant to be funny that she gets dragged into the mafia family business etc, buttttt shes so serious about avoiding them and wanting nothing to do with them but still manages to do exact opposite of what she wanted to do. Welp gl anyway author
This is really good👍👍 different from most fanfics where the MC joins the plot, this one has a MC where she highly avoids it. It's been a while since we saw a lazy character and it's one of my fav so that's a plus. The interactions between character is really funny especially with reborn🙃🙃 I look forward to more of this, SO DON'T YOU DARE DROP IT!! Good Job Author-sama😆😆😆
it was acceptable even before mukuro appeared ... it seems that the author completely ignored vindice and did not give any explanation about it ... and this forced interest that appeared out of nowhere in the mc for mukuro.
Not the best nor the worst. The quality of writing is ok and has little to no gramatical and spelling errors. Updates are pretty consistant but at this time of writing if it follows the trend of most new stories itll stop updating in about next month to the next 4 months (i hope this dosent happen cuz i dont see a lot of female lead characters or lazy protaganist that work decently) Overall its a fun read so far by wut i assume to be a relitivly new author so keep up the good work and enjoy being in this small community author :)
It’s a nice and quick fast paced read with a bit of romance. I liked it overall.
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———————————————————————————————————————— I am speechless. This is one of th greatest books I have read on Webnovel that’s actually completed!
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absolute master piece!! i like the mc and it just make me feel giddy!!! and excited!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This novel was beautiful you made me clap at a book who claps at a book I did because that was in the best entertaining s*** I've ever seen I loved it we need more of your kind author-sama you're so f****** awesome I want to read more of what you write best novel ever
Loved the characters and the Way The story was written. the ending was a great close and would love too see a part 2. Would recommend any day of the week.
now this is the first review ever doing. I would say it's a good read though like I said in one of my comments it feels rushed. the chapters were short however I'm used to that from other novels/books. it was detailed enough that my imagination could fill in the blanks but someone with a lesser imagination might have a hard time.
I honestly don’t know why this novel doesn’t get more love, i mean its one of my favorite. When i first started to read this i actually dropped it for a while, but picked it back up cause i was bored and then proceeded to read the entire thing in a few hours. The start of the book is in my opinion not very good, but it just gets better and better as time goes on. I highly recommend this for anyone looking for something different because it is very unique, i have seen many novels crash and burn because they fail to set up a different type of story, but i can confidently say that this one peformed outstandingly well. The only thing i didn’t really like was the relationships in the beginning happened way to fast for my taste, but if you continue to read the author gives a good reason to why this happened so don’t drop instantly like i did, continue to read and you may find a diamond in the rough.
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