Luna's Diaries
BOOK 1 of LUNA'S DIARIES: Secrets, Lies, and Deception
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Luna Harper, a senior high school student of Greenfield University, is also known to be the reigning Queen since freshman year. She's known to be the Queen of Bad Behavior but the Sweet and Proper Daughter of the Harper Industries. She truly has it all - the fame, the status, and beauty.
She went missing for a year and returned to the University with a secret and is as if everything is still perfect. Her life isn't the same as before anymore because of one mistake that ruined her life. She has become a fragile girl that is walking with a ticking bomb.
Her everything suddenly became nothing until she met Nathaniel Cooper.
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Hi there! This is a shameless review on my end as an author of this novel. I really hope that you will give me a chance and read my novel. I promise you that you will not be disappointed. I have planned everything for Luna's story and how many books (volumes) this will have. Also, to all my reviewers: I hope you will give me an honest and detailed review. If you really don't like my story, I wouldn't mind getting a low rating because that means I have so much more to improve on. Please do leave reviews and power stones if you see it deserves this novel your praise! Thank you so much. Lots of love, Anne.
Excellent story, very well presented. There's lots of intrigue. Love the strong sassy Female lead. I would want to keep reading in order to find out what happens next!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, A splendid work from a Filipino like you! This is amazing! many scenes were comedic and I was laughing left and right. Entertaining and Splendid! ADVICE Work more with your narrations and fluidity. A smooth sailing ship without a bumpy ride will make your novel more charming. Not saying yours is not but it can still be improved. Hehe Though, your grammar was legit! Awesome!
As I read, I'm feeling nostalgic here. I mostly find this type of story on Wattpad. That slice-of-life university feels, damn this is uncalled for. You did a great job writing this author! In just the first chapter, it already caught my interest. So I'll leave this review to get your rating and read for more!
Really enjoyable opening. The protagonist is a great character, a total bitch but one with a secret who you can't help but feel sorry for and cheer for as she constantly gets herself into trouble. I'm intrigued to find out what her secret is that she's so desperate to keep hidden. Spelling and grammar are at a high level, prose is clean , clear and easy to read in large doses. Highly recommended reading.
Despite some grammatical errors and some other flaws I had found in this novel, this is still pretty great for any romance reader. There are some morals there to learn and the story fits the target audience. Good job!
Hello , this is a real good book . I would love to know what happened in her life . The mystery that the guy , MC , carries is also good . I like how those two communicate . I love your book hoping to get more updates ~!!!
The dialogue flows, and the characters are really well-developed! I can tell that Luna's used to being the former queen, and can't adjust to her reality just yet...she's a unique lead that I'm looking forward to reading about~ I'm curious about her fall from grace, though, but I'm sure the author's planning for that in the future! Can't wait for the next updates! Good luck!
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Obviously I cant say much regarding character design/worldbuilding/plot yet because of the limited amount of chapters, but as far as writing quality goes, this novel is great. The dialogue is well fleshed out, and the main character is developed naturally. I will update this review once more chapters are posted. Keep up the good work.
It had a good start and the FL r well written, her personality is fitting her very well considering she once a queen in her university, those pride and arrogance didn't disappear after she steps down from the throne.
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Ohhh Gawdd you're such a great writer. I mean from the plot to the development of the story and the overall story.. I can say that I love this so so much. You should continue with the hard work and keep writing. you know just like they say, " Art is more like a hidden diamond and pebbles in the mud if its really good someone will find it sooner or later because the brilliance of a diamond is completely different than that of a pebble after all mud could not cover the light a diamond had before." I hope your good work gets more recognition. keep fighting..!!!
Overall I’ve found this book very entertaining. All the characters are cute in their own ways. I think the main character just gives out a vibe like a real person would do. Good story development, and a unique reading experience. All in all, great work! 5/5
I love the book cover and the synopsis since it made me feel interested to read it. You did a great job writing this story, the flow of your story is great and the plot is pretty interesting. Keep writing!