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I think for a new novel, it is doing pretty well to say the least. It has a very good plot line, and introduction as well. I loved how the author used very descriptive words to let the reader know what they were trying to say. I did notice there are some grammar issues, and I recommend checking those out. You can use various online grammar error apps, whatever is available to you. I think despite that, the book has a really nice flow to it. The characters are well developed , the only issue I had as a reader were the mistakes in the book. If you can edit those, I think this book would be a hit!!! I want to mention I am the user known as BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

The idea is pretty neat, a little hiccups on some sentences and words but it is a good novel if done right, uploading seems to be good, I know how hard writing is so good job for a first novel if I'm correct that this is not your first.

its a nice concept, the author is going in the right direction so far and i am not feeling sleepy while reading this novel so far hahhahahah

This novel is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The plot itself was unique and was very engaging to read. I am very well pleased with the writing of the author. Good luck and may your novel be blessed with more readers.

cant say much from the first four chapters that i have read...its a start hope you polish the novel cause i think i might read it after waiting some more