Seen Zone Z

Wow, both a chilling start, and very sad, I am touched. The writing is good quality, and the overall story has a good element of suspense and intrigue that made me want to keep reading on. A few occasional grammatical errors but overall, a really good read! Nice work author!

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After reading for a while, I observed that the author improved with his writings. It was difficult at first but you will get the hang of it in the future. With few edits and finishing touches, this will improve in terms of quality! I gotta say I'm inpressed with the author's growth! What a nice feeling of your brethren improving!

It touched me deep.It was very sad😭😭. Very brave of you to write about such a sensitive subject. Well done and keep going. It has potential dont give up.

Overall was a solid story, I would mention that some words are repeated and the descriptions are a little weak. Also more adjectives could be used in the story to draw the reader into the story more. World background so far is a little incomplete but it could just be that way for the mystery. Looks good overall, keep up the good work :)

It is a really good story with interesting characters. While there are a few grammatical errors, the story itself managed to draw me in. Improving your grasp of the language comes with practice, but having a good story and concept aren't that easy. This story has the potential to become a great one. Keep up the good work.

The story is quite intriguing and the progression is good. Writing quality seems to be getting better by the chapters and I find myself wanting to know more about the events that enfolds. Overall though, I'd advise author to keep up the pace and also edit the previous chapters as you progress

After reading a couple of chapters of this book I consider you say that it has a good overall tone and the author really pays attention to the details and progression of the story. There's still some room for growth but so far from what I've seen it's looking good .

Plenty of ideas on that book, and I honestly thing that there's room to develop them more. We want to live with the characters, fear and tremble with them, be happy with them. Those four chapters could be, in my opinion, at least 10. There's so much to say about it !

Great story, please keep up a good work Author. Great Great Great Great Great... Wish u to achieve what ever you striving for. The potential is not limited:)

A Science Romance that in its first 5 chapters already has 2,228 Views. What the author raises. Author: Aeipathy_02, in Seen Zone Z, in genre. Sci-fi Romance. The synopsis has this romantic premise: "I love you" doesn't always mean "I'll stay." The family routine changes from one moment to the next, even in the notions of the reality of the children, some say they robbed us, others it is a kidnapping. Being sold over and over again, they arrive in fields where they will work as farmers, with uninhabitable places to sleep. A harsh reality, mentionable as science fiction to digest the reading, if I encourage to cry or reproach fate.

This novel is awesome! I have been already hooked up with the beginning of this novel. The plot is also exciting and entertaining. Can't wait for more chapters! I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author.

Interesting plot, and it's very addicting to read. I love the book so far and I hope the author keeps up the great work! I'm glad I got here in the early stages of this story because I know it'll be famous in the fututre

From just 4 chapters, it's hard to determine where the story is going, but so far, it was easy to understand, and I think the novel definitely has potential. Keep up the good work!

I was wondering why "Seen Zone Z". It synopsis does explain that the world they're living in, turns hellish when Erin received a message from her fiance. A journey in where all reader will be curious whether love still able to conquer all or not? Follow the story to found it out