Amy, a girl that just found out that she had superpowers, her life turned upside down and her only goal is survival but instead, she saves the universe from dangerous MUTANTS and started making friends.
Great concept with lots of potential. The best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!
4 years ago
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Captain_yasso
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Great concept with lots of potential. The best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!
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