sounds like a suspense, betrayal, back stabbing, love genre story.
Good job, author. Keep it up.
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3 years ago
1
Mel_Aniv
The story and narration was very engaging to read. I didn't stutter in any way so cheers for that. The paragraphs are just right when it comes to their length and it was fun to read. The first-person narration was at its finest. I can really see it with my imagination as I read. The plot was on the right pacing when it comes to progress and more chapters to come. Hope the author finish this and not dropping soon. 🙏
3 years ago
4
KS_Loona
The story seems promising and I love the way you were descriptive about the emotions of the characters. Great job! Would love to read this...😇[img=recommend]
3 years ago
4
The_Procrastinator
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3 years ago
3
Garvita_Kushwaha
The title of the book is really good. It's interesting and amazing. Good job author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
3 years ago
3
Da_Rose
This story is just it for me. The writing style, the flow, the plots and above all Gabriela's thought pattern is everything!!! Though, there are a few grammatical errors strewn here and there, the book is still a wonderful read. Keep up the good work author.
Waiting for a new update... hehehe😁😍💗
3 years ago
2
WhiteVest
It's a slow burner, the chapters are long so I had to tame my time with it. The MC is great, I don't like her though, she mistreats everyone including herself, and is unappreciative. might be unfair to say after only 4 chapters but that's my first impression.
the writing is great and the story is beautifully told. Great writing Arthur, keep going.
3 years ago
2
DGiunia
Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘
btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰
3 years ago
1
orphinx
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3 years ago
1
Jozan
I love the premise of the story so far (btw I'm currently on chapter 28) it's something new that I can enjoy especially for the fact that it feels like being a ghost and ease dropping on others life lol 😂🤣🤣 Love the work keep it up ☺️
3 years ago
1
Darkswan
The narration is good, it is a really nice read, the story flows well and the characters are nice and amazing plot, well done author keep up the good work.
3 years ago
1
Jephthah_
Definitely, it's a nice book. The narration is very understandable, nice storyline, great world-building. If you love LGBT books, read this, you won't regret it.
3 years ago
1
shrEk2o3
The story line is great. This is an awesome read. Great job author! The MC is relatable (I'm not into k-drama's lately too) LOL. And her name reminds me of Gabriela from HSM. Hehe. 5/5 because I believe that this novel is worth a try. If you have yet to read, I say: READ THE BOOK!
3 years ago
1
MiuNovels
a good story with laid out plot and characters. the only thing i notice is the dialogues. its gets jumbled. i dnt know if its intentional or its the app. but i suggest that break long paragraphs apart and if another person is talking.
overall. a good read. i just got confuse sometimes on whose talking since the mc and the others dialogue r hurdle in one paragraph
keep updating [img=recommend]
3 years ago
1
Haru_Catty
First of all, Character Design was absolutely fun to read. The author definitely knows how to make characters likeable.
The story is really progressive and fun to read. It's not something you'd get to read everyday! It's super unique.
The writing was suuuuper funny. The author's humor is great.
The only thing that confused me was the dialogues and the narration, it was kinda mixed up (I couldn't understand who said what xD) But eventually I got used to the author's unique style as well!
Also first person narration; The thing a lot of authors can't get right. But Lobak was introduced so casually that i didn't feel like i was reading a book. It was like I was talking to her ;-;
Conclusion : Give this a shottttt!!! It's super coool!
sounds like a suspense, betrayal, back stabbing, love genre story. Good job, author. Keep it up. ................................
The story and narration was very engaging to read. I didn't stutter in any way so cheers for that. The paragraphs are just right when it comes to their length and it was fun to read. The first-person narration was at its finest. I can really see it with my imagination as I read. The plot was on the right pacing when it comes to progress and more chapters to come. Hope the author finish this and not dropping soon. 🙏
The story seems promising and I love the way you were descriptive about the emotions of the characters. Great job! Would love to read this...😇[img=recommend]
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The title of the book is really good. It's interesting and amazing. Good job author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This story is just it for me. The writing style, the flow, the plots and above all Gabriela's thought pattern is everything!!! Though, there are a few grammatical errors strewn here and there, the book is still a wonderful read. Keep up the good work author. Waiting for a new update... hehehe😁😍💗
It's a slow burner, the chapters are long so I had to tame my time with it. The MC is great, I don't like her though, she mistreats everyone including herself, and is unappreciative. might be unfair to say after only 4 chapters but that's my first impression. the writing is great and the story is beautifully told. Great writing Arthur, keep going.
Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘 btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰
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I love the premise of the story so far (btw I'm currently on chapter 28) it's something new that I can enjoy especially for the fact that it feels like being a ghost and ease dropping on others life lol 😂🤣🤣 Love the work keep it up ☺️
The narration is good, it is a really nice read, the story flows well and the characters are nice and amazing plot, well done author keep up the good work.
Definitely, it's a nice book. The narration is very understandable, nice storyline, great world-building. If you love LGBT books, read this, you won't regret it.
The story line is great. This is an awesome read. Great job author! The MC is relatable (I'm not into k-drama's lately too) LOL. And her name reminds me of Gabriela from HSM. Hehe. 5/5 because I believe that this novel is worth a try. If you have yet to read, I say: READ THE BOOK!
a good story with laid out plot and characters. the only thing i notice is the dialogues. its gets jumbled. i dnt know if its intentional or its the app. but i suggest that break long paragraphs apart and if another person is talking. overall. a good read. i just got confuse sometimes on whose talking since the mc and the others dialogue r hurdle in one paragraph keep updating [img=recommend]
First of all, Character Design was absolutely fun to read. The author definitely knows how to make characters likeable. The story is really progressive and fun to read. It's not something you'd get to read everyday! It's super unique. The writing was suuuuper funny. The author's humor is great. The only thing that confused me was the dialogues and the narration, it was kinda mixed up (I couldn't understand who said what xD) But eventually I got used to the author's unique style as well! Also first person narration; The thing a lot of authors can't get right. But Lobak was introduced so casually that i didn't feel like i was reading a book. It was like I was talking to her ;-; Conclusion : Give this a shottttt!!! It's super coool!