Horrible grammar, spelling and more. Honestly, so much more, but there' no point getting in to these things without the first two problems being taken care of.
4 years ago
6
InternetSaint
MC with a SYSTEM story.
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4 years ago
4
ArtoriaPendragon_
Literally impossible to understand, It’s like you put a Bunch of paragraphs into a cheese grater, then blended it and Even that would be ebtter than this
Horrible grammar, spelling and more. Honestly, so much more, but there' no point getting in to these things without the first two problems being taken care of.
MC with a SYSTEM story. ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... .........
Literally impossible to understand, It’s like you put a Bunch of paragraphs into a cheese grater, then blended it and Even that would be ebtter than this
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆□□ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆□□□ -hard to understand ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆□ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆□ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆□□