Traveling the multiverse reincarnated as Hollow knight
Dave was an ordinary guy, nothing going for him and nothing really going against him, one day when simply minding his own business and crossed the street to head home from a day of work, well I think we all know where that is heading, so let’s focus on someone else... ah here we go *ahem*
This is the story of a man who defied fate itself and strove to be different, will he succeeded, well let’s find out
(*so I got bored one day and had my phone in hand and went why not so here is my first ever written story criticizing is fine and wholeheartedly accepted due to not having any experience*)
[*any object, place, person or reference in this story is not owned by me and I would like to credit to the actual owners of them*]
((*please don't expect a stable update of chapters, this is on a whim and just something I decided to do for some fun*))
A solid story that covers what I believe should happen during an Isekai. While some might not like how certain aspects are set up I find that this makes the story unique and almost fresh to read.
5 Stars! Keep up the good work!
Is this heaven a hollow knight fanfic???? Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie
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not much to review only 3 chap, but it shows potential, It's not impossible to read and I didn't find any grammatical errors, it just started meaning the characters had no time to develop at all and since for now thinking further than hollow knight is useless i will use it's story's world backround for the rating, i don't know f you plan to continue this but it would be fun to read, I might change this review if new chapters come out.
Hey, writing my own review, with my own thoughts, about my own story. If you like the story then hooray you liked it, if not then alright then its how you feel
it was a very great story, sadly cut short but I'm very thankful towards the author for his although rushed quite good ending. i want you to know that I really liked the concept of the story and that your writing was actually quite good. i think you didn't have to say about your ideas that you don't think you can bring them to life because i think you can and they would have been Great. thank you for the read and i hope you are doing well... on a side note does anyone else know some other good hollow knight novel, I've been searching for a while and this was the only good one I found?
Its not traveling multiverses but more like universes Come to you. The wholesome moments are great but the romance feels a little rushed. (She kisses him the moment they met) the ending feels rushed too. At least you finished it instead of droping it.
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overall a feat novel to read it just wish there were more chapters and its updated quicker orher than that its great please dont drop.......
It's wraps up nicely, short yet fulfilling
beautiful just amazing really loved every second of it.
Thank you for finishing this wonderful story.
The romance could be better and that thing with the daemon prince was confusing, but for a short read this story is pretty good.
I enjoyed this quite a lot the story was fun and you didn't murder all the good characters like some fics I've read so yeah good story