Blood Domination System

Alright, here we go. Nice grammar selection, top notch world building, narration smooth, writing technique superb. I think that's all to a good novel right? Lekan's character was fully displayed from the first chapter and that was exciting enough to move to the next But a lot repetitive words makes the chapter kinda stagnant after a while and...I think that's all.

Interesting premise. Makes you wonder where this story will take you. Was hooked from the beginning. Fantasy is something hard to write but I am pleasently impressed with your skill author. Good job.

Ah, the first line of the Sypnosis caught my eye and I just had to open the book! I loved the first chapter and couldn't resist reading the next! I can wait to see how this story will develop and I hope you plan on adding a sassy love interest for our boy because I would really like that too. Sir Impeccable had impeccably mind blown me once more with this impeccable writing. Honoured , Master. *bows* 💗

Morgana, that was the first name that made me laugh out loud. Why are most villainous named Morgana? Gave me a merlin vibe there. Anyway, overall, the book is interesting with few grammatical error - come on the authors is not a computer - and the first chapter is very very interesting, an overpowered MC does set the mood for an interesting read .Anyway, if you haven't read this book, you're going to regret having not read it sooner. Kudos to you author😘😘