This is really interesting i thought it would of seemed abit strange but it supringlsy fits and its a very good idea maybe try add some more characters it would be Difficult but possible.
4 years ago
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Idontcare94
This story or novel is good and the plot is Straightforward. it worth the tIme to read.
The system is very simple to understand and not like the other system that just all the way to godlike being next the same person who gave it to him.
Keep on going with your story.
Tip IF you going to do some romance. i recommend that you introduce th love interest later like in to 100 - 150 chApter.
So before all that, you can focus on the character and plot
Good Luck and i will Keep on reading Your story
This is really interesting i thought it would of seemed abit strange but it supringlsy fits and its a very good idea maybe try add some more characters it would be Difficult but possible.
This story or novel is good and the plot is Straightforward. it worth the tIme to read. The system is very simple to understand and not like the other system that just all the way to godlike being next the same person who gave it to him. Keep on going with your story. Tip IF you going to do some romance. i recommend that you introduce th love interest later like in to 100 - 150 chApter. So before all that, you can focus on the character and plot Good Luck and i will Keep on reading Your story