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Reincarnated as Emiya in Fate/kaleid [DROPPED]
Some guy was murdered by a truck just to wake up in a white room with just a desk before him. He realise that he have no memory of his life but still have all anime knowledge. ROB spinned the wheel to decide to which world he is gonna reincarnate and it landed on Fate franchise.
After a long thought process our protagonist decided to choose Fate/kaleid as his new home and Emiya's powers as his gift only to be reminded that cooking with Emiya was an option.
In the new world he trains his powers to be ready for all the danger that will come his way but instead of that he is the one who charges right at them. He is also antagonized by his murder from the previous life which is of course the Truck that killed him.
This is my first novel and english is not my first language so don't expect masterpiece.
There isn’t much to go on, so I’ll make it snappy. Pro’s - No filler (or all filler depending on how you look at it). Good pace overall. - Decent prose, details could use some work, but the clarity is on point. - I didn’t feel the need to call the FBI even once, very impressive. Cons - Heavy reliance on source material for inital investment and characterization. - Introduction is fumbling around. - MC is kinda stupid wothout reason, and a chunni. - The author dosen’t like his own work; which is a recipe for disaster. Especially for a fan project. -Constant 4th wall breaks for no reason. Not good, but not bad. Still, for a first tike hobby project; it shows you got potential.
Now this is what I'm looking for.
Pls dont drop I've seen many fics with good potential drop at atleat chap 5-15...... ........ .......................... ............................ .
came looking for copper and found gold.... Despite Author saying he is not happy, he should listen to his readers. Rin's Tights save lives!.
Someone posted in a forum about this FF... im must say i liked it a lot. I dont think there is a HRM FF about Kaleid anywhere. So im very pleasently surprised. I enjoyed a lot the teasing of rin, but do add some screen for Luvia Chloe BEST GIRL.
Fâte/Kâleid... with hârêm?. Illya, Chloe, Luvia and Rin are a must in the hârêm. I just think its to bad that you dont have the +1^8 tag. I also suggest you add some comedy since fate/kâleid has lots of comedy
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