Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]
Shivam was a kind guy but died by Truck Kun, and later reincarnated as a Snake [HeBi]
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"F.u.c.k I died on my life's special day when I was finally about to lose my virginity, I died as a virgin loser, I work very hard for that day and Finally, my landlady permitted me to have s.e.x with her. I wasted my four precious Years of life courting her and when the fated day of my life finally arrives. but what the hell happened to me, yes I remember"
Suddenly few more hazy memories are started appearing in his mind as he thought about his previous life.
"You damn truck Kun, I died in the accident while crossing the road in Delhi, I am fucked up by damn truck Kun" Shivam started to curse as he thought about his previous life on earth.
He was a nerd who was living a carefree life in India, he dropped from university and doing a part-time job in a hotel as a waiter, he has no girlfriend because he was not popular among girls, but fortunately, he fell in love with his landlord's second wife and started courting her, she pitied him and finally four years later permit him to have s.e.x with her, but alas destiny was very cruel towards him, Truck Kun f.u.c.k.e.d him before he f.u.c.k her.
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Ding
[You killed tier 1 Fish you gained a beast stone, 100 Tier 1 beast stones needed for advancing next level]
"What, who are you, am I become retarded, suddenly I can hear things out of nowhere in my mind," Shivam said in a low voice
[I AM RAPHAEL, AND I AM GOING TO ASSIST YOU ON YOUR JOURNEY]
"Raphael, what The hell are you," Shivam asked Raphael in a serious voice.
[I am system and I am imprinted in your will to guide you on your journey and I will help you to become evolve ]
hearing Raphael's words, Shivam was surprised, He laugh and shouted in his mind.
"Oh, god you didn't abandon me. I heard many isekai stories when I was on earth, but it becomes a reality"
"Hey Raphael, can I become strong with the help of yours, and what do you mean by evolution," He asked to her
[Yes you can become awakened as you reached the Tier 5 beast, and you can get the human form] As your will she replied.
"Raphael what do you mean by the awakened, "Shivam asked curiously.
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The mc is smart and loves the beautiful women. He is op and merciless at the same time. he is not some kind of mindless killing machine who kills people for no reason.
Read few chapters you will like the novel. And Become part of this exciting roller coaster ride with Shivam, who is going to become a Legend.
Note: English is not my native language, if you find grammar errors in my novel, please don't mind, I will correct my Grammarly mistaken words or you can point out those mistakes.
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The first few chapters are rushed and maybe you will find grammar errors, at least read 40 chapters and then decide whether you want to continue or not...
Hello, guys, your dear author is here, I just wanted to say that my English is not good because English is not my first language, but I am trying very hard to improve myself, please keep loving and keep supporting my work.
It's a good book but It doesn't have many chapters yet so I cant really talk about update stability or world/character development but I will say its a good story that reminds me of The Snake Report and Tales of the World Devouring Serpent the only issue is the grammar which the author is getting better at after each chapter so overall its a read.
HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work the second time after completing one month. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. [img=recommend] The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stones or send gifts. BIG THANKS FOR READING!!
dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . . I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . . aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us😅 I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.
This is an amazing story! I am really hooked from the begining. I want the MC to grow and gain levels. I love the imagery from the MC hatching. I can just see a snake feeling the same! And it just gets better from there!
I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story. Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.
This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.
I started reading but found it difficult due to the words not being used or structured right, you can get the jist of what your trying to say in it but it is difficult to read the English, I hope you can reread and fix them or get someone who can proof read your work before hand might help.
We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation! I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests. I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.
it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.
actually, this is a nice story. The plot of the story is super exciting and it makes me want to read it more. keep it up, author. good luck with your future.
Wow an op serpent, this is something new and kind of interesting, I have read only two chapters and here I am leaving a rating, please support this author he is best.
the story seems to be interesting but lot grammar mistakes. i understand English is not native language but when you publish a work you should put out good quality. would recommend for everyone to give a read and ecide for themselves
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