What a thrilling story!👏👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ added in my library...the plotlines are well defined; the characters are well defined! I don't understand how one can create such a story filled with magic and creatures it's out of my reach and small brain this explains how imaginative the author is.
Keep up the good work! Kudos
4 years ago
1
Mel_Aniv
Story potential was there. All you need to do was nitpick some of the mistyped words. There are also some dialogues that don't start with Capital letter and ended with punctuation. But still, overall a good read. Kudos!
4 years ago
1
Livia_pendragon
This story is well written so far ,I can tell from potential and I love the mc already and this story definitely belongs in my library. Good luck dear author.
4 years ago
1
Akari_Uzumaki
There is not much to read ,but one this is for sure and that is, this story has potential sis, i love the way you described the princess and it seems we have another dashing prince, i would love to put this in my library to see what the other chapters will look like.
4 years ago
1
Samerah_Kassim
Love the new book, even though it only has one chapter, cannot wait to see what the other chapters contains and well done on describing the princess Charlotte.
4 years ago
1
Darkswan
Here is me doing a shameless review, i give my story a full five star for my effort and i really hope you guys like it, yes it has a few errors but i assure you that i will fix them.
4 years ago
0
dead_oop
so, there are some punctuation mistakes and some typos but overall it's really great. I read till chapter 3 and I had to give the review!
The prince and princess are really great, they seem to be strong. The prince is the carefree kind of dude and I really like that.
4 years ago
0
Apprentice4
The world-building here is simple and the FL seems quite genuine and relatable even though not much has come out at this point in the story.
It has a lot of room for refinement and improvement which I'm would make this story stand out. Good luck👍
4 years ago
0
Dream_blue98
This book is just great, The writing quality is just awesome, the updates are very regular, the development of the story is going quite well,
the things I like the most is how our cute Charlotte and Martin interact with each other. Im curious to see how they will fall for each other and rebels against the father of Martin.
the character design seems flawless. I like how the writer put enough details in the story, It doesn't seem lacking anything. The story was a compelling read.
You have done a very great job.
at the last the elements of magic and Dragon makes the story exiting.
another good quality of author is discription. she is very good at discribing everything very vividly
Please keep updating more chapters.
4 years ago
0
Mary_Algen_Guiang1
First of all, I love the cover of the book. It is spectacular art that makes you want to read the book asap. Second, I love that the plot of the story revolves around magic and beautiful characters. great job author!
4 years ago
0
Livia_pendragon
I have read today's chapter and I have to say that you did a great job and the new twist is great. I cannot wait for the next chap to see what is in the valley.
What a thrilling story!👏👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ added in my library...the plotlines are well defined; the characters are well defined! I don't understand how one can create such a story filled with magic and creatures it's out of my reach and small brain this explains how imaginative the author is. Keep up the good work! Kudos
Story potential was there. All you need to do was nitpick some of the mistyped words. There are also some dialogues that don't start with Capital letter and ended with punctuation. But still, overall a good read. Kudos!
This story is well written so far ,I can tell from potential and I love the mc already and this story definitely belongs in my library. Good luck dear author.
There is not much to read ,but one this is for sure and that is, this story has potential sis, i love the way you described the princess and it seems we have another dashing prince, i would love to put this in my library to see what the other chapters will look like.
Love the new book, even though it only has one chapter, cannot wait to see what the other chapters contains and well done on describing the princess Charlotte.
Here is me doing a shameless review, i give my story a full five star for my effort and i really hope you guys like it, yes it has a few errors but i assure you that i will fix them.
so, there are some punctuation mistakes and some typos but overall it's really great. I read till chapter 3 and I had to give the review! The prince and princess are really great, they seem to be strong. The prince is the carefree kind of dude and I really like that.
The world-building here is simple and the FL seems quite genuine and relatable even though not much has come out at this point in the story. It has a lot of room for refinement and improvement which I'm would make this story stand out. Good luck👍
This book is just great, The writing quality is just awesome, the updates are very regular, the development of the story is going quite well, the things I like the most is how our cute Charlotte and Martin interact with each other. Im curious to see how they will fall for each other and rebels against the father of Martin. the character design seems flawless. I like how the writer put enough details in the story, It doesn't seem lacking anything. The story was a compelling read. You have done a very great job. at the last the elements of magic and Dragon makes the story exiting. another good quality of author is discription. she is very good at discribing everything very vividly Please keep updating more chapters.
First of all, I love the cover of the book. It is spectacular art that makes you want to read the book asap. Second, I love that the plot of the story revolves around magic and beautiful characters. great job author!
I have read today's chapter and I have to say that you did a great job and the new twist is great. I cannot wait for the next chap to see what is in the valley.