Demonica

It was a good read, to be honest. Yes, it requires improvements here and there but I still enjoyed it. I have only read 6 chapters for now but I'm gonna continue. I better see more chapters soon author!!!

Even though this isn't my cup of tea, I'll judge it objectively. The grammar and syntax are very good. The flow of the story is great for the theme. I was a bit unnerved, since demon-related things make me a bit nervous(don't know why the theme unnerves me), but it was a great read overall.

The story is easy to visualise and it is quite intriguing to be very honest, I would recommend this book for you all to try, the author is doing a good job💕💕

There are only a few chapters out right now, so I can't say how good the story truly is, but one thing is for sure - the beginning is eye-attracting. Great novel, and I definitely look forward to see where this story is going to go.

Really a good read, the way scenes were described was awesome, you can feel it, already added to my library, author well done.looking forward for more.

This is so AMAZING... I loved it...I enjoyed the chapters I read so far and will be keeping this book in my library. I have nothing to point out here as you have done an absolutely amazing work!! Good work, Author!!

Everything about this is perfect. The tension, the mystery, the blood, the suspense, the writing, the chapter titles, the EVERYTHING! This book is one for indulging in heart-racing and agonising events. Imploring unique formatting at times, it was a visial masterpiece. Kudos, author! Can’t wait to hear your thoughts on my work ✨

Writing quality is excellent! I really enjoyed reading this story so far! It felt like I was watching a great movie, a horro movie! Stability of updates- just as the author said, the author has a schedule of posting the chapters. Story development- Love it! Hands down, I really like the way you write things, mate! Character Design- Chef's kiss! I really love all the characters in the story! I can't wait to read more about them! World background- The author tries his best to describe everything every chapter! So It feels good for me! the only thing I'd like to suggest is the first part of the chapter. You could add a prologue wherein the parents died from the men. I think those dialogues would be an important part of the story as well! it's not a requirement, but a suggestion, since I wanna know what happened to them in a showing manner. Kudos for the author!

I genuinely enjoy what I've read so far. The grammar is well-written, so it's easy to read. The pacing is well done, though the beginning is a bit confusing, I'm sure that's just a matter of "It will be uncovered later". The characters are interesting, especially the demon character, who seems to have interesting motives. I also really like the "gray" parts of the story. If anyone is considering giving this a read, I'd really recommend it. [img=recommend]

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.