White Jack

Amazing just amazing. I love this story. I just love the way the characters are made and even the way the white jacks are designed. The sci-fi setting is believable and the story pacing is one of the things I love about the story. There are some grammatical errors but they can be solved.

The first chapter introduces the main character and her love interest, and there is some foreshadowing. The plot is interesting. The idea and setting of the novel is great.

The story is quite enticing and the concept is superb as well. The author has a good grasp of the English language and clearly has a strong grammatical power. As the author continues to progress I can tell that this novel will become a hit my only complain is the paragraphing issue but that will be solved in a jiffy. Give the book a read its quite interesting.

that was a very good story. The story is interesting and every time I read a chapter it seems to pull me deeper. the concept is pretty good. it would be great if it could make the characters of this story look alive. that's if you understand what I mean. for sure, good job and keep it up. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

All in all the idea is interesting. The origin of abnormalities is mentioned very well. Further the setting is well defined. What bugged me was the paragraphing issue. Over in all, the novel will do well as long as the author grows with the idea.

A great read. It's captivating and enticing with a great and well paced storyline. I would like to continue reading this book and see how it progresses. I definitely recommend it if you'll want a good read

the three brothers, white jack, black jack and jack black .

Action and adventure has always been my concern. Ima give 5 stars to author because of this. I hope this book stands out among others. The plot is kinda intriguing. Wanna discover more..

I liked the first chapters. It moved a bit slow but is the only thing I can say against It. The characters are interesting and there are a few surprises. I like more lighthearted stories bit anyone that likes drama would enjoy it. 👍🏻✌🏻👏🏻

I believe the author has a lot of creativity and it totally shows in this book. the characters are well thought out and the world that has been created is rather unique. there are different new concepts being introduced which all are awesome. I have just read the first 3 chapters so far, and I can't wait to see how the story continues

I think that I have only come across problems which can be fixed fairly easily, like the paragraphs, as I read a lot of novels it's not a problem but new readers may find it quite hard to read and will most likely lose their words so separate the book and there are a few grammatical errors but even I have that problem so it's fine.