It’s written a bit like an anime script in the beginning but gets better as it goes along I really like this story
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3 years ago
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anonoguy
the abstract concept of cringe boiled down and distilled to its bare essentials. stop writing it like an anime script.
also slice of life doesn't work as well if there is no hook.
It’s written a bit like an anime script in the beginning but gets better as it goes along I really like this story ………………………………………………………………….
the abstract concept of cringe boiled down and distilled to its bare essentials. stop writing it like an anime script. also slice of life doesn't work as well if there is no hook.