An octopus's tale

Read all of the eight chapters and can say author is improving his craft, also the book has a lot of potential along with having an interesting plotline. Some parts fill scary. Now the negative some parts feel stiff like conversation and description. Don't fit many words in one paragraph try give space. Improve on the conversation and pacing. No hate just kept the opinion since you want to improve. I really think this novel has potential and I wholeheartedly recommend.

The narration is very vivid and engaging! Conversation with the characters are interesting and the story will really hook the reader to read more. The writing is top-notch! I didn't find any huge mistake plus the grammar is good^^This is a good story!

your story overall is so good, I like the way to describe things it force me to visualize each and every scene, well done Author keep going looming forward for new chapters ❤️

The story is thrilling enough for you to keep reading it until you notice that there are no chapters left. I hope there was more to it, really. I liked the characters, especially the siblings and their relationship. The descriptions were also detailed. Overall, this is definitely a good read

The story is really special, it has mystery and horror parts in it. The characters are well-written, each with unique personalities, a few small errors but nothing major. All in all, it's an enjoyable and captivating read.

I like it, the mc gives off 'curious but I'm undergoing puberty' vibes. Hope the brother endures her for a while hehe, it's a great story the sibling dynamic is good. Hope to see moreee.

Very intriguing introduction. Only planned in reading the first chapter (beyond the copyright ofc) and I ended binging the whole thing. Lots of potential here

Such a nice story with a good start. The character introduction is on point and the author did a good job in crafting and understandable narration. Keep it up. This story has potential.

Self-review, because you are your biggest fan! I'm participating in the August 2023 WPC and am thrilled to let you readers decide on my fate :) , and if you do want to support me just add me to your collection, because you know, creation is hard work. The concept is 'eternal life' but I like to think that my version breathes new life into this concept, and I love always exploring new things. Although trying new things out of the trend is sort of a gamble, I love doing things my way, hopefully, it checks out in the end. The characters and the plot are the backbone of this story, but the development and the worldbackground will also be given equal importance. Hope you enjoy this, and let me know if you like it in the review section!

This was a really good read. At first I thought author dropped it. This is too good to drop. Then I saw that author is on a break. I'll definitely come back to read it on July.

The story is really really interesting, I am loving it. The narration is clear and vivid. I love the flow of the story, and it was worth the read. Great story author, I'm rooting for you. All the best.