Mikey's other brother
Author: Aleph_Null
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What if mikey wasn't alone?
What if mikey had a second sibling?
What if this sibling was op?
What if?
Tokyo revengers fanfic
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My first story so my grammar might not be the best I'm only doing this so I can get some practice for bigger projects I might take on though I might continue this plot as I get better!
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Shameless writer review this is my first work so please help me with some mistakes and recommendations sincerely ~ Writer-San (keksueuiwh did ksuwrnjwj
tokyo revengers tensei(reincarnated) shinichiro doesn't die, akane doesn't die, izana will become brother, that's how good it is
Author im not trying to be rude but its way too fast paced. I mean I wanted a gang fan fic where the gang slowly gets stronger until it becomes the top gang and then when they’re older join the yakuza or something like that. Also you made the mc way too op i mean his wishes were the experience/abilities of mike tyson bruce lee muhammad ali and the strength of a gorilla and bear and then out of nowhere he somehow gets super speed and is able to dodge bullets and catch them in between two fingers there’s also a massive lack of fight scenes.
Pretty good. Mc in humans standards is much more stronger than captain america i guess. Mc cares for his new family. I wonder what will happen in the future since he is now there. He can probably solo all the gangs in one go.
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I'm helped by an automatic trafutor, so because of the bad grammar, I didn't understand almost anything about the story... a sadness.................
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Si bien la gramática no es lo mejor sigue siendo entretenido y entendible, no lo dejes caer. Good story ....................................