The story has a good start, the comic timing is weird but always on point so that's not a problem.
Main character has a good story and interesting mental set up, it will be interesting to see him fall in love. This novel has true potential, let's see what the author does next. Best of luck!
The story has a good start, the comic timing is weird but always on point so that's not a problem. Main character has a good story and interesting mental set up, it will be interesting to see him fall in love. This novel has true potential, let's see what the author does next. Best of luck!