Re: Princess Knight

Huh... I saw a fic similar to this on FF.net but instead of Artoria Lily that one is Proto. Now to the topic, there are only 2 chaps so yeah...

Artoria Lily... What more can there too be said besides the great writing and anticipation for more chapters. Great FanFic Author-san Please DON'T DROP

You know, ironically I was hoping they were inspired by the Saber Proto fanfic, but not in this way ... But hey, I like it, take your 5 stars and my power stones.

The whole story premise is quite good, what this story lack is depth. This story is quite similar to the one on FFnet, which also is a Re:Zero FF but instead of Saber Lily, that one used Saber Proto. So lemme point out some problem that makes this story lack depth in my opinion: 1. The MC's lack of mental struggle is bothering me for some reason. The author decided to insert some random Joe as a Saber Lily. But to me so far, it's more like Saber Lily we're transported to Re:Zero instead of SI as Saber Lily in Re:Zero. 2. It needs more build-up, especially the fighting scene. A Lil bit more detail will be much appreciated before the fight ended. 3. Slow down the pace for better world-building. There are other things, but I think these 3 are some of the major concerns you should fix to improve the quality of the story. Keep up your good work author 👍

The best story I have ever read in webnovel.com, it's a crossover between fate and re:zero and oh is the plot so amazing The idea is great and the twists are so very amusing If you skip this story, your life shall be forfeited

I'm still concerned about NOT KILL, indeed the caliburn sword has a code of principle, I don't know if prohibiting killing is included in it, but it's a bit annoying

Reveal Spoiler

Love this, haven't watch re zero but idrc, i hate Subaru the simp, The way that the personality of arthuria lily merges with mc is just..👌 .

la historia es realmente buena y atrayente la e leído más de dos veces, aún haci me sigue poniendo triste que haya pasado tanto tiempo sin actualización, y quería de saber si es que va haber una próxima actualización o si simplemente será abandonada

abandoned. :(

this story is great please update more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Can you give me the name of the novel on FF. net?....؟.............................. The novel is very beautiful..... Ssdff Fffggggggggggg Ffcgf

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