A man died in our world. Due to the rules of reincarnation and the amount of Karma he had attained in life, he was reincarnated into an alternate world he was familiar with. Unfortunately for him, he was going to the world of Invincible.
Now he must not only survive against the normal superhero threats but also the Viltrumite threat
Harem or no harem? His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy There's vomit on his sweater already: Mom's spaghetti He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgetting What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out He's choking, how? Everybody's joking now The clock's run out, time's up, over, blaow! Snap back to reality
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Giving up on all Invincible fics after this, most of them are written to be "Gary Stu wants to suck off Invincible and have teenage drama", it quickly got boring but qith the amount of fake 5 star reviews that get spammed as soon as the first chapter dropa on this site/app, then stories like this end up with more than 4 stars
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The grammar is excellent there are no plot holes that I could see, overall it was kind of nice to read. However there are no arcs or plot that makes one invested in the story, and it's more like reading a diary, I personally lost interest at chapter 8 and dropped it.
Love your kiri fic and I've read that so long ago. And today I was like is there any invincible fics and bam! Your just popped off when I searched invincible thank you for writing this
this is one of the little times that I don't know what I will say about a novel more than good, so good job author I can't wait for more chapters
Good Story so far, can't wait to see more
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Great novel[img=recommend] Would have loved it if you really completed the novel.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
THIS is gold i couldn't stop until I was finished this story was wonderful please give us more or at least a sequel to this masterpiece of a book