His body weakened as he fell
It was his strength he could not regain
It would always end in pain
A story which follows the fallen angel named Zagreus, he was unknown, mysterious, and pretty much hidden in all of the underworld for a good amount of time unless his mystery was revealed to the world
the first 3 chapter is good,character development is simple but unique,overall i like this story,and lastly i have request for author-san,dont make the mc too mysterious please
Good day author. The characters, plot are spectacular although I have something to say, please take it as a constructive criticism. Is it just me who noticed you often use the same preposition like "as" , and its fine to use them again and again but its getting hard to read it andd maybe its just my personal preference. Also good job for coming up the title, I am amazed the title got that deeper meaning LOL haha. For a beginner this is a amazing story and plot I DEFINITELY HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS BOOK TO ALL READERS OUT THERE. HOPING FOR MORE READERS TO COME!!!!!!