I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse
I will not die. Not for someone else.
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For as long as Kairos could remember, he experienced things twice. Originally, Kairos believed that was completely normal. However, as he grew up, he realized that it was not nearly that simple.
Kairos would experience things one second before they happened. At first, he used it to avoid stubbing his toe or having a plate fall on his head. But as he got older, he realized that being too different from other people was essentially a sin.
And so, Kairos quickly covered his ability up and pretended to be a loner. He let himself get shoved around even when he knew he could avoid it, just to blend in with the crowd.
However, things weren't just left at that.
Along with his strange ability, Kairos always had dreams.
Dreams of a rising red sun.
At first, they were infrequent and more confusing than anything else. But as time went on, he had this same dream more frequently.
And it also became more terrifying.
Kairos would wake up in a cold sweat, not truly understanding why he was so afraid. That is, until one day.
When the red sun rose.
And the apocalypse descended.
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I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse is a story about about Kairos, someone who can see one second into the future. He uses this ability in order to survive a sudden apocalyptic event, where the sun is deadly, and monsters appear. Novel had at interesting design, and the main character had a interesting ability, however there's too many things that cause you to go "that just doesn't make sense". Writing quality is pretty good. It's readable, no obvious grammatical errors or mistakes. Nothing to write home about either. (4/5 stars) Onto the story development. Like I said previously, this novel had a interesting premise, where the sun can kill you, while it creates various monsters. However, there is a downright ridiculous amount of plot holes. I'll just make a quick list. - The words "loner in the apocalypse" are in the title. This is the opposite of what happens, the main character immediately makes a party with people who he doesn't trust. Later on, he accepted someone else into the party that he himself admitted that if the guy didn't have a certain weakness, he would try to kill them all. - The main character doesn't trust his party, so he doesn't upgrade his stats to show of his strength. A few chapters after stating this, he immediately fights ten+ monsters all on his own. (They are more powerful than humans) - Main character stocks up on stat points for no reason. You cannot add stat points while in combat as it would disrupt your attention. This happens over and over. He decided to attack a group of bandits with average-ish stats (2 - 4 points in each stat) while having 20+ points that aren't allocated. - Main character fights some random chick with red hair that has a katana. After making her surrender, the main character asks for her katana. She gets a new weapon before giving it to them. Main character for some reason accepts this stupid arrangement. Then, the main character, despite literally being able to see the future, lets her take one of his companions hostage. Theres more, but I can't be asked to write about this completely illogical story. (1/5 stars) Character design. It's meh. Side characters are rather useless, not sure why the main character decided to take them in. After all, part of the title is "loner in the apocalypse". Aside from that, the main character is exceedingly stupid. Nothing he does makes sense. He accepts people he doesn't trust into his group, including people who have every reason to kill him. He decides to hide his strength, before choosing to randomly show it off a few chapters later, etc. (2/5 stars) World background is a solid 3/5. I have only read eighteen chapters so I can't say a whole lot. There isn't a terrible amount of world-building, but the amount of content before the apocalypse was rather lackluster. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars) Overall, I feel like the novel would've been much better if the author went through his novel for the ridiculous amount of plot holes. I feel like the author didn't really have a plan. I give this novel 3 out of 5 stars.
i like it keep going and don't drop i can't wait to see more chapters. [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update]
Title is “Loner in the Apocalypse” but immediately after it starts he groups up. Hoped for something a little unique, but this one so far just seems basic.
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I will not die not for someone else this is the sypnosis But why do you have romance isnt that will make the story the opposite of your story
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Well good enough I thought mc is smart and all but he is just too suspicious of everything. He doesn't trust system and loses his chance of becoming strong, cares so much for Nicole's Parents but show little to no affection towards his own. And loner My a*s he is travelling with a group (Nicole's Family) which seems like a burden to me. Sorry Dude I'm dropping this. Although author has great himar (Author's note at end of chapter is always funny) but it's not my cup of tea. Thank You!!
This is fantastic, the development, and action scenes are very well developed, the character growth, and strength growth is really well done, and I can see myself reading this for a long time.
Uhhhhhhh, MC just keeps his points and never uses themmmm, then he curses himself for not adding them and then does it againnnnnnnnn. Moreover he is extremely distrustful of his team for no reasonnnnnnn.
It's alright if you don't mind reading contradictions. The title is bs, he's all abou 't forming a team even before it begins, and he cuts himself as a form of pain resistence training since forever... He also apparently had dreams about the apocalypse and didn't do Jack to prepare other than cutting himself. Flashbacks are poorly indicated if at all. Its an alright read if you don't mind feeling you read a poorly translated wuxia novel with great grammar and western names. That said, that's only up until it gets monitized and if there really isn't anything else to read. Its like listening to a little kid spewing off his fantasies about how this and that character he imagines is better because if yours does this, his will have a special item or prep to do that, and then when you bring the slightest Incling of logic into play, not even pragmatism but simply, I thought you said he is this and that, then obviously he's that too but the new and better thing more so. Get it? There's no lasting definition in anything. First chapter paints him as some sort of bullied unfortunate self destructive lonely emo kid that can see the future, and the next he's calling his friends, mostly girls to get away from the windows cuz the sun is bad and takes of his mystical glasses of a clear stone that blocks his future sight abilities that he found as a kid cuz else he be like cyclops with his lazer beams so he needs tha mystical glasses to block his future sight... Ya get it? No? Exactly. That's what the story is like.
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The novel is pretty good. It uses the apocalypse genre pretty well and includes a very interesting mystery with the mc.