Hell Hath No Fury At All

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Love the characters, the plot is amazing too, would love to read more about this novel so I kept it in my library, and please keep adding more chapters, good job Author.

A first point of view is not bad for narrating the story, it's a great way to let the readers engrossed. A fantasy packed with magic and monsters--readers who love fantasy should give this a try as the author unfold the story of a man who once lived a meaningless life and... (find more about it, reader)

The story building for this world and the description of the characters are really well done! My one tip for this novel is that you space out your paragraphs more. Break up some information to build up a sense of suspense for the next line. Other than that your story is really well done and immersive! Added it to my library and keep up the good work!

The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️

I love this novel! The writing is pleasant to read, I hope the author will have time to finish this quality work! ...............................................................

Woah! Awesome start especially him killing her grandmother. I thought he would be able to control the fire from start due to his previous life's memories. well good job author you have hooked me up for the ride. Can't wait for the next chapters. keep it up!

your story is extraordinary I love your style your style is unique. your grip on your plot is very strong. arrangements of characters are great.

Another rebirth storyline with a much more excellent beginning in the waiting room of an old soul coming for a new life from the beginning of his life. The grammar is okay. It's worth your time reading this creation.

The story is really good. The author did a good job in describing something. The quality of writing is awesome. I had immediately add this to my library. Will continue following this novel !

The book is wonderful, I really like the fact that he's an adult in a child's body, meaning he will make better decisions and I just love Seheala's character

Honestly, I like the story because it is a good story that is worth your time and read. There are some mistakes but out of the other stories in the same genre in here, for me, it stands out and more then anything that now deservers recognition. I like the plot, but I think Sehaela needs to stand on her own as our MC seems to over shadow her. I like the first paragraphs of each chapter, they get me each time as they could be funny some times. Something that would make you want to turn to another chapter. Veirna was a great character but I did not feel her loss that much as I feel less time was spent on her and the others..ooppss might be spoiling too much. Loved chapter five. Do not want to spoil so read it to find out lol. The grammar is ok, with some small mistakes here and there but it does not take away from the read. The only small issue I would have would be that some of the paragraphs are too long and need to be split up. other then that, it was and still is a fun and interesting read. Zionai is a well grounded MC

I'm not a fan of the writing. Between the narration that tells too much to the reader, as opposed to allowing the reader to experience it; long, exposition filled paragraphs; and grammatical errors, I feel a lot can be improved upon. The world and scene descriptions are decently well done, painting a clear picture in the head of the reader. The plot's pacing is also decent, it definitely picks up after C5(?) and the awakening ceremony. Overall, the story is fine, but is let down by the writing.

From the very first chapter, I was pulled into a very interesting story unlike other transmigration reborn in another world stories. While the very first chapter, is fairly short, I was still intrigued by the setting and plot. The author also does a pretty good job of providing details and information about the characters and the world. There are few grammatical errors here and there and there could be some more descriptions of some characters and settings, overall it was still a very enjoyable read. I'm really looking forward to seeing Zionai progress as a character and learn about just who exactly is he and what abilities he has. I think the title is ominous enough lol to keep me wondering about what exactly will happen. I'll be doing my best to continue reading over time! Readers check this story out, and awesome job author keep up the great work!