The Extra's Return
[You have been killed by the Hero of Light.]
[You have died.]
I had died at the hands of the main character in the novel I had read before.
But I got another chance. I regressed and returned to the time when I first entered this novel world.
Once again, I live in this novel world as an extra character.
Since I have experience and knowledge, especially my World System which had upgraded, I'll do what I want to do.
I will become stronger than the main character.
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POV 1 : √
Harem: √
Toxic Friends: X Big No.
Naive Protagonist: X
Pervert Protagonist: X
Toxic Harem: X
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English is not my first language, so, feel free to comment if any grammatical errors.
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I am the bone of my sword. Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades. Unaware of the beginning, Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent weapons, my hands will never hold anything. Yet, my flame never ends. My whole body was still Unlimited Blade Works.
Not a villain. Doesnt feel like he is an adult, more like a slightly apathetic teen. The plot of the novel he transmigrates into is nonsensical, having the hero betray humans at the end which has forced the mc into the 'inevitable saviour' role or face extinction. His belief after suffering through two lives is that he wont hurt others unless they hurt him first, great logic. 18 chapters in and theres 3 potential females, can already see where that goes, dont know why theres no harem tag. Grammar mistakes a few times each chapter.
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From beginning to finish this novel was way too cringy. Primarily because of the cliche over the top egotistical arrogant nobles, and the treacherous family, not to mention the broken English and the supposed man-child hypocrite MC trying to get revenge in every chapter. Anyway, I can go on till the end of time telling you how brain-dead this novel is but there are some good parts to this novel they are just overshadowed by garbage filler where the plot frustratingly goes nowhere. My point is if you like the cliche mentioned above read it if not simply don't waste your time on this novel.
Honestly I can see potential for this story but there are glaring flaws from the chapters I have read up to so far, chapter 16 that is. The author keeps switching pronouns of genders, they would describing a character as a he but not even a few sentences later they'll call them a she. Plus there was one time the MC hit his maid for being disrespectful towards him, but straight away on the next chapter that maid is now a butler. I highly suggest the author to proofread through their chapters once or twice before uploading/publishing it on Webnovel.
Good Idea. However is let down by the author trying to get us to feel bad for the MC and to put him down. Going over 20 chapters with no real wins for the MC. Paid chapters start at 20 and there is no significant development to tell if you want to pay to continue. In the 20 chapters it still feels like what other books would do with 5. I think it'd a great idea to have already lived the novel. But there is no real power fantasy from having the foresight of the future which makes it feel awkwars
I thought it was interesting but.. the dialogues are bad... the level of english is also not good. the characters are one dimensional
he got great system (not toxic kind) ✔️ he got transmigrator boon ✔️ he knows novel storyline from 1st life ✔️ he got regressor memory from 2nd life ✔️ he got master to teach him ✔️ he got nobility ✔️ but why MC made lots dumb, and stupid action, like being slave and beggar to life (on 2nd life). I seriously doubt MC ability to walk path humanly possible.
the quality is not that bad, but the development of the story as some issues, its like you wanting to watch john wick, with all the anger, intense feeling that comes with it and dind out that the john wick character is being played by mr bean. despite mr bean being a good charcter or actor it definitely does not suite a movie like john wick. that is what the author is trying to do, i got to chapter 29 and i am just forced to write a review, the fighging sequences are not good enough, what was said about some characters at the beginning of the chapters do not blend with them 10 or so chapters later. the mc seems to talk to himself or monologue but the author tends to use that to repeat the same thing by explaining again in a first person perspective. the more i read the more points drop for the review. if only author can reread what they wrote.
Interesting so far . . . . . . . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Its great, but the writing quality is a bit poor. The plot of the novel is actually confusing and nonexistent. Add the harem tag too. It has multiple females till date. Look into it. I hope u improve.
Nothing new in world background.. Story should have been the plus point but the extremely bad english made it unbearable. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Pros: A fun piece of writing to read. Simple paragraphs and a fairly fast pace. Many good scenes and good characters. Cons: Sometimes confusing storyline. The writing quality is not that perfect.