Young Justice: Copy Wheel Eye

5 star Gud Very gud Absolute gud Dont drop it Or I Will Find Your location And Launch A Missile 140..............................................

This is a really cool idea keep it up Nice work Author Also Please don't drop lol .

The world background seem a bit odd and lacks detail sometimes. The author could have detailed properly that the MC was in DC universe. Although that could be quite an issue to some that was not my main issue with this novel. The thing is, when you create a FF with a template thing, you expect them to at least have characteristics of the one whom the template is. This novel detailed an Uchiha template and not a template for Sasuke. If you really know Naruto, in the part where they were kids, Sasuke was already a genius because of his comprehension and talent. Here, the template being named Sasuke means almost nothing. There was no increase in comprehension, no increase in talents, and the author could have at least made it like the template was influencing the MC. Its pretty boring since the growth of the MC seem so slow even after having an Uchiha Template. And the fact that the story barely detailed DC characters specially on the first parts of the novel made it worse. The point of this should have been to make the readers want for more and set expectations.

will the mc go through the same thing sasuke did and his he going to have his own naruto to pull him through this ..........................

En qué momento el MC dice que es el Young Justice?. A este paso regresaré cuando la novela tenga 200 capitulos, en ese momento cambiare mi reseña ya que hasta ahora lo que más me recordó fue la relleno de Naruto.

Really enjoy the idea of a Uchiha in the DC universe and proper progression along with it. However, you never get proper clarifications about the main character, is he an OC that was put in DC with a family? how does he know about the Naruto universe? Is he a Isekai character of any kind? So far the whole ordeal goes on like we should know what the author is thinking. and read with his mindset on things, just blatantly ignoring how the main character came to be.

I'm really enjoying this fic. There are a surprising little amount of good sasuke template/reincarnation fics. I usually don't like template fics that much because they usually just turn the mc into the character the template is for but this fic seems to be doing a good job of letting Sora be his own person. And for those complaing about him being edgy that's just how 99% of the uchiha behave (except for shisui but he's a rare exception). The sharingan itself is deeply linked with emotions and will cause the wielder to feel them to the extreme wheather that be love or hate (this was all explained by the 2nd hokage). Anyways sorry for the tangent I'm excited to see where this fic will go![img=update][img=update][img=update]

cool fanfic so far keep it up. ............................................................................................................

good story but dropped when he turn a 12 year old zatanna in non emotional killer. too Quick of a change for me

super emo racist author...................

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Nice.

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this is not sasuke. he is always contradicting himself and let zatanna force her way into his home and stay there for plot and then she sides with mc instead of her father