A Otaku Assassin Reincarnated To an Eroge game?
Someone is running...
He's body is so injured and bloodied...
While he's getting chased by an group of black in suit who wanted to kill him...
While running into the buildings, he suddenly lost all of his strength and fall down while he jumping into the buildings...
He fell on the road and saw a Truck, no one is driving to it...
He isn't sad nor mad because of a shameful way to die.
He's excited because he's going to die from truck-kun today!
He is an Otaku professional Assassin who isn't good nor bad but like to play Eroge games or watch anime when he have free time!
He's a really different assassin... Because he found his happiness in his life! Being an Otaku!
So when he see truck-kun is going to kill him. he's otaku sense is tingling!
He's excited!
He then got ran over by the truck and...
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The cover is not mine...
Okay. As a fellow author let me give you some advice. First make your chapter length same. I mean you write too much unnecessary information. which confuse readers. Too many grammar mistakes. So First write manuscript in Wordpad or notepad then after checking copy it. Too many loopholes, you first create loopholes and then explain it. that's just plain annoying. 1. like how Carter died? 2. you skipped whole 6 years? 3. power rank system is kinda meh! 4. too much heroines. 5. unnecessary information. 6. characters are kinda sloppy. you sometime make 2000 words chapter in which more than 300-400 are just your notes. and other half is unnecessary information. why don't you just make 900-1000 words chapter? your chapter count will rise and your writing will might become better.
has potential the grammar is a problem and the way the people interact with each other is a little weird and if asher was 2day old on lil sis bday which she was 6 then now he 6 she is supposedly 13? so the other sisters are 15ish now how dafuq do they know about the sexual stuff