To Love The Demon
What was a lady to do when she was being dumped by the one she thought would love her forever? Easy! Simply get over him by attending a matchmaking event in hopes that another guy as attractive, as considerate and perhaps slightly better would appear. That was exactly what happened to Eveline Lennox except what she thought would be true love happens to be a love of convenience! Axel Draven was wealthy man who owned Draven Corporation and is known to be cruel and cold to his employees, especially women. He was forced to participate in the exactly matchmaking event Eveline went to due to his mother's orders. True love fades and was instantly replaced with fake love. A contract brought the two together as they continued to fake the whole act in front of families and friends and the public. However despite such arrangements, Eveline could not help it as she found herself falling deeper and deeper in love with the very one she could not love. To love the demon, such risky emotions and feelings she has. Will a love, true and pure, blossom between the two individuals? Or will conflicts and issues appear?
So far, the story is pretty good. Author's writing style manages keep things fresh and the way of describing things makes it easier to understand things. The writing is from a 1st person perspective but it keeps things interesting and understandable. The way of conveying things makes it easy and stable to understand what the character is feeling and what would they feel in a possible situation, and thus it's easy to connect to the MC. A solid 4.6 for me
A solid 4.0 for me. The only issue I have is the writing. Is it bad? No, in fact it's great but the prose or the way it's written felt so stiff and infodumping. That aside, the story is good. The concept is simple yet woefully done. It feels endearing and nice. The pure emotion written feels so descriptive. — I advise the author to seperate long paragraphs into smaller one's. Also note that when creating a paragraph, only put one characters action, then make another paragraph when creating another action, Here's an example, “I fumbled in response to the intellegent observation that came out in his mouth. The man, infront of me, raised his eyebrows as he laughed” × “I fumbled in response to the intellegent observation that came out of his mouth. The man, noticing my flimsy behavior, raised his eyebrows as he laughed.” ✓
Well it's such a simple concept yet the way you write and explain this story makes it entertaining, it's still in its starting chapters so can't say much but yeah for now it's enjoyable ... Though I would recommend you to improve the grammar you use...