mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................
3 years ago
19
Ryuuoujin
So far, after 24 chapters, a decent story, that’s interesting and enjoyable to read the most part.
The story feels neither rushed or like it it’s dragging its feet, and there have been no major info dumps so far at least.
Though you should prepare yourself for some spelling erro and wonky grammar here and there, but author is often quick to correct or address them when pointed out.
If none of that is turning you off, you should give it a try, you might like it.
3 years ago
11
Ruby_banks02
An interesting book I'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage.
For now, I do not know if the MC will later evolve into a human, but I guess I've got to be patient with the author.
Just keep a steady update time and try your best... I highly recommend this book to other readers.
3 years ago
9
B34st_animations
why did you change the story I liked the slime one???
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2 years ago
8
timeawayfromstress
his novel is here bıraktım.mc in the next section, he is hunted by guards, or the object of research of sorcerers olur.mc if he ate her and then started hunting in the woods, I would continue reading, but when Mc became someone who didn't work with his brain, tried to be heroic, didn't have intelligence, I quit the novel
3 years ago
4
Logan_Stevens_3358
Really cliché and the mc is just so bland and lifeless and there’s basically no world building and the ecchi sense just make no sense and they’re just cringe and embarrassing to imagine that someone wrote that and thought that is was good and it bring shame to that time I got reincarnated as a slime and it’s like a really bad remake
3 years ago
4
Wringbro
A nice story. I have read up to chapter 4, and I like it. Writing is good, not complicated words, simple, and the general plot looks good. Please continue updating the chapter.
3 years ago
4
King_Of_SpaceTime
belive it or not in a anime (when a rpg life is sh*ttier than your real life) or something along those lines if I recall slimes were 5x stronger than humans and goblins where 50+x stronger capable of moving at super Sonic speeds and would normally kill hundreds of humans before even getting a single injury unless it's that one overpowed mc that I'm not spoiling
3 years ago
3
Naysay3r
As I read this, I thought that the slime was gonna be OP at the start but it turns out it isn't. I hope the slime will get more powerful as the story progresses on, but surely slowly.
3 years ago
3
Sleeping_Fox_UwU
This even if I don't want to, my subconsciously compared it to another masterpiece...
But even then this is a good novel...
though there's some development necessary which will come with time...
so with little chapters now...
I can say is this goes as I hope then this will be a super awesome novel...
Thanks author ...
keep it up...
make it another masterpiece...
3 years ago
3
DaoistiLCgyE
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
3 years ago
3
IntrovertedWriters
So good. On 4 chapter but it was fun to read. It doesn't have fancy writing but it isn't bad too.
Hope u continue publishing chapter.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeee.
3 years ago
3
Mary_Onaduja
The beginning was really interesting. Kudos, my fellow Author. I could hardly find any fault or grammatical typos. It was well edited. I could have gifted this story a power stone but I don't have one. Am loving the way the story is going and about the boy who became a slime and had powers is making me want to become a slime myself. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😄😄😄😄😍
3 years ago
2
PEARL_WANG
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
2
Vaperrapter
Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.
mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................
So far, after 24 chapters, a decent story, that’s interesting and enjoyable to read the most part. The story feels neither rushed or like it it’s dragging its feet, and there have been no major info dumps so far at least. Though you should prepare yourself for some spelling erro and wonky grammar here and there, but author is often quick to correct or address them when pointed out. If none of that is turning you off, you should give it a try, you might like it.
An interesting book I'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage. For now, I do not know if the MC will later evolve into a human, but I guess I've got to be patient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try your best... I highly recommend this book to other readers.
why did you change the story I liked the slime one??? ......................................................................... ...........
his novel is here bıraktım.mc in the next section, he is hunted by guards, or the object of research of sorcerers olur.mc if he ate her and then started hunting in the woods, I would continue reading, but when Mc became someone who didn't work with his brain, tried to be heroic, didn't have intelligence, I quit the novel
Really cliché and the mc is just so bland and lifeless and there’s basically no world building and the ecchi sense just make no sense and they’re just cringe and embarrassing to imagine that someone wrote that and thought that is was good and it bring shame to that time I got reincarnated as a slime and it’s like a really bad remake
A nice story. I have read up to chapter 4, and I like it. Writing is good, not complicated words, simple, and the general plot looks good. Please continue updating the chapter.
belive it or not in a anime (when a rpg life is sh*ttier than your real life) or something along those lines if I recall slimes were 5x stronger than humans and goblins where 50+x stronger capable of moving at super Sonic speeds and would normally kill hundreds of humans before even getting a single injury unless it's that one overpowed mc that I'm not spoiling
As I read this, I thought that the slime was gonna be OP at the start but it turns out it isn't. I hope the slime will get more powerful as the story progresses on, but surely slowly.
This even if I don't want to, my subconsciously compared it to another masterpiece... But even then this is a good novel... though there's some development necessary which will come with time... so with little chapters now... I can say is this goes as I hope then this will be a super awesome novel... Thanks author ... keep it up... make it another masterpiece...
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
So good. On 4 chapter but it was fun to read. It doesn't have fancy writing but it isn't bad too. Hope u continue publishing chapter. Moreeeeeeeeeeeee.
The beginning was really interesting. Kudos, my fellow Author. I could hardly find any fault or grammatical typos. It was well edited. I could have gifted this story a power stone but I don't have one. Am loving the way the story is going and about the boy who became a slime and had powers is making me want to become a slime myself. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😄😄😄😄😍
Reveal Spoiler
Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.