LEGION (ENGLISH VERSION)
A secret society who had been ruled this world for thousands years held a game every ten years for a month, and a man were tasked to protect a girl that he didnt even know from hunters for a month.
Since long ago, this world has been controlled by global elites and we call it the New World Order.
Most of them hide their identities, and they have important positions within a country.
They have a favorite game, which is hunting.
Before the existence of human rights and slavery still existed, they hunted slaves by releasing them in the forest and letting hunters hired by each elite hunt them for extraordinary prize money.
The game will be held for thirty days in a randomly selected region, each elite from around the world sends their three best hunters to hunt down a target.
A target will be chosen at random and protected by a Knight or commonly called a Protector.
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