Not bad!, and if you are going to make some characters of One Piece appear here, why don't you put also Boa Hancock or Nami!
Harem FOR Life!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
24
Some_Thing_8779
Not bad so far. I just found this novel 10 mins ago. Hope you write atleast 40-50 chapter before you drop it.
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3 years ago
10
EyeOfSauron
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3 years ago
6
Soulreaper31337
Love the story so far. I have high hopes for the story.
3 years ago
2
Morald
the idea is pretty good and character design is pretty cool let just hope the quality and the story never drop.if i can give suggestion then don't change story too much ,too many change sometimes ruin the story ,i see this in many fanfic.
3 years ago
1
fanfun
I gave up when auther added a second Nomu for no reason in the usj incident, but the writing quality was really good, especially considering some people just write like if dialog is the only thing that matters.
sh** writing , horrible grammar, not sure why this has high reviews
3 years ago
0
Rafael_Ramos_5282
I like the story it reminds me odlf that one mha fic that had the main character have kaidos ability and about rokushiki why not have it a style that was use by Garp
3 years ago
0
leo26
All I see is wasted potential, give it a try though you might like it or you won't who knows 🤷. .............................................
3 years ago
0
warrioroflight_3
It's good more posts chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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3 years ago
0
Griffin138
I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential.
Not bad!, and if you are going to make some characters of One Piece appear here, why don't you put also Boa Hancock or Nami! Harem FOR Life!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Not bad so far. I just found this novel 10 mins ago. Hope you write atleast 40-50 chapter before you drop it. ............................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler
Love the story so far. I have high hopes for the story.
the idea is pretty good and character design is pretty cool let just hope the quality and the story never drop.if i can give suggestion then don't change story too much ,too many change sometimes ruin the story ,i see this in many fanfic.
I gave up when auther added a second Nomu for no reason in the usj incident, but the writing quality was really good, especially considering some people just write like if dialog is the only thing that matters.
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sh** writing , horrible grammar, not sure why this has high reviews
I like the story it reminds me odlf that one mha fic that had the main character have kaidos ability and about rokushiki why not have it a style that was use by Garp
All I see is wasted potential, give it a try though you might like it or you won't who knows 🤷. .............................................
It's good more posts chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story.............................
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I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential. I see potential.