Emma Fleur was leading a perfect life when a little truth turned her world upside down. the world's peace depends on Emma. How would be the journey where she is playing as an action hero not knowing what comes next?
The concept she chose here is very different. I think she needs to change the narrative style of it. The characters, the side story, the untold tales are quite mysterious. But they could be more thrilling.
Over all, keep it up.
😊😊
2 years ago
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trace_19
Great job! Maybe spice up it a little or something, I don't know. But I liked the way it's going. But now Shawn's back, things are getting more complex. Excited to see what happens
The concept she chose here is very different. I think she needs to change the narrative style of it. The characters, the side story, the untold tales are quite mysterious. But they could be more thrilling. Over all, keep it up. 😊😊
Great job! Maybe spice up it a little or something, I don't know. But I liked the way it's going. But now Shawn's back, things are getting more complex. Excited to see what happens