The Knight of Desolation.(DxD)

A different take on a overused world but It still got me hooked. I hope to see this work grow into something nice in the future if you continue to work on it.

good spelling and writing. A New perspective I haven't seen in DxD fanfic. I'm really loving the whole abyss background you got going there. I just can't wait to see how the main character starts bashing people trying to marry her.

It's very impressive how this writer doesn't seem able to finish a novel.

The grammar is fine, some annoying parts that are hard to miss. Story goes by fast, but after each timeskip there is a small rundown as to how Amaru has been doing which is fine by me. While Amaru is plain and pretty emotionless, the few times that she does show some emotion is good, humor goes fine by her character. King is also a good addition to Amaru. Don't know how frequent the updates are but what I do know is that this story is being updated. Not much world background, but a fine amount is told to us by a few sentences.

I love how you write about someone unique and not some random guy turned into another op character. It’s fun and interesting. I’ll really like to see a original from you.

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Love the story and characters I just hope it continues becouse it has turned into such an amazing book, plz don’t stop posting

it was good until that last 2 chapters. those chapter sucked